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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What happened to the rest of it? Talk about dead end stories... and it was really getting good, too.
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and u never finished it? why not that was good!
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, shame on you. How dare you end the story at the best part. *Stares at you evilly* You'd better update soon or something bad will happen to you. *Begins to chant evil incantations*
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! but is it done 0.o
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh you are a tease. How do you cut it in the middle like that? Please finish this, it's a really good story.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, I really wish you'd finish it, or at least add a new chapter. It was a really clever idea.
Lq
Lq
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, the story line is pretty good, but the actual writing of the story needs work. It's okay to put the dialogue in the same paragraph with the person who's saying it. You're leaving out some words in some sentences, and capitalizing words that do not need to be capitalized, like "fault" and "evil" and "witch". You also have quite a few sentence fragments.
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how could you do that?
how the fuck could you
end a lemon like that!@
you BETTER be adding more
to this in the near and
i do mean NEAR future.
I'm waiting now.
how the fuck could you
end a lemon like that!@
you BETTER be adding more
to this in the near and
i do mean NEAR future.
I'm waiting now.