rate_review Reviews

i enjoyed torn , i think u should finish it . it sounds so good and u did a great job on getting into sesshoumarus mind. that was deep!!! its veary good u should be proud .i could never make something like that. it was so cool!!! i want u to make more , please , its so intresting . u can really get into it. its better than some of that other stuff they have on there. its very deep and intresting and i want to read more . thats a big complament comingfrom some one that hates reading.:D expacely because im asking for more. that was really asome so please make more ..:D:D:D:D:D:D ^_^ *_*:] thanx

amanda

How nice! Keep it up!

So far so good, i like the tone you are working with keep up the good work. and please try to post soon


Naheta

Good to hear from you again! Interesting chapter. I'm curious as to what Rin picked up...the rosary maybe? Anyway...don't keep us in suspense too long with the update.

I loved it! I think you did a great job at Sess' character! I also saw the foreshadowing with Rin, and the imagery was superb! If you don't get an A+ for your course, I don't know what will ^_~ please continue, I think this has the potential for so much more. Keep developing the characters! I love the dark mood, that should NEVER change ^___^ it'll give me inspiration of my own twisted and sadistic writing! Looking for updates!

Great! Hope you update soon!

Hey, really liking the story! Can't wait for next chapter!

Wait so does that mean Sess is gonna take the Tessiga?.................

I like it. Not as heart wrenching emotional as the first chapter, which is what I think made it so good, but Sesshoumaru is a lot of things, but emotional he is not. You were still quite descriptin thn this chapter, but I did catch a few spelling and grammar mistakes.
Later - Crash, a.k.a. broken_angel

YAY another chapter. I like it. I really do. Please keep writting it is quite good.