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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Since there's another Amanda I'll use this name! This new chapter was oaky! It's not really pointless, it shows ho things are between Sess/Kag
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I greatly enjoyed your fic...at least what you have written so far. Sesshoumaru is a cold, vicious, and icy demon. You portay him perfectly. I always thought that Sess/Kag stories should start out with intense hate...and slight curiosity. Yoe a e a wonderful writer, continue the story. I cannot wait to see how the relationship progresses and how it ends.
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!
Please update real soon!! I'll lok forward to the next chapter!
Please update real soon!! I'll lok forward to the next chapter!
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea I am back! Love the imagry. I feel as if I am there with them. You describe the scene so well. Well, Sess is the regular
pain in the arse. I can picture him being like that. Cold, curious, calculating to get what he wants. I would like to see what he
has got in mind for Kagome. Probably nothing good. Ha! Kagome wanted to spit in his face! Ha. you go girl. to bad her mouth
was dry. I will wait to see how you get these to together (if that is what you are planning). Good chap. Till next update. Ras.
pain in the arse. I can picture him being like that. Cold, curious, calculating to get what he wants. I would like to see what he
has got in mind for Kagome. Probably nothing good. Ha! Kagome wanted to spit in his face! Ha. you go girl. to bad her mouth
was dry. I will wait to see how you get these to together (if that is what you are planning). Good chap. Till next update. Ras.
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea I am back! Love the imagry. I feel as if I am there with them. You describe the scene so well. Well, Sess is the regular
pain in the arse. I can picture him being like that. Cold, curious, calculating to get what he wants. I would like to see what he
has got in mind for Kagome. Probably nothing good. Ha! Kagome wanted to spit in his face! Ha. you go girl. to bad her mouth
was dry. I will wait to see how you get these to together (if that is what you are planning). Good chap. Till next update. Ras.
pain in the arse. I can picture him being like that. Cold, curious, calculating to get what he wants. I would like to see what he
has got in mind for Kagome. Probably nothing good. Ha! Kagome wanted to spit in his face! Ha. you go girl. to bad her mouth
was dry. I will wait to see how you get these to together (if that is what you are planning). Good chap. Till next update. Ras.
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea I am back! Love the imagry. I feel as if I am there with them. You describe the scene so well. Well, Sess is the regular
pain in the arse. I can picture him being like that. Cold, curious, calculating to get what he wants. I would like to see what he
has got in mind for Kagome. Probably nothing good. Ha! Kagome wanted to spit in his face! Ha. you go girl. to bad her mouth
was dry. I will wait to see how you get these to together (if that is what you are planning). Good chap. Till next update. Ras.
pain in the arse. I can picture him being like that. Cold, curious, calculating to get what he wants. I would like to see what he
has got in mind for Kagome. Probably nothing good. Ha! Kagome wanted to spit in his face! Ha. you go girl. to bad her mouth
was dry. I will wait to see how you get these to together (if that is what you are planning). Good chap. Till next update. Ras.
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I loved the line where he she retaliated. 'when did life become so meaningful to you.' genius.
Got to wonder what the great lord of the westernlands is up to. Kagome seems quite heartbroken and lost. I think you
are portraying her well for the situation. Sesshoumaru is very 'in' character. Will watch for the update.
the one and only scarecrow in the field of Inuyasha.
Got to wonder what the great lord of the westernlands is up to. Kagome seems quite heartbroken and lost. I think you
are portraying her well for the situation. Sesshoumaru is very 'in' character. Will watch for the update.
the one and only scarecrow in the field of Inuyasha.
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Story's great so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. ^_^. I like it. Quite true to their characters. I am interested by what Rin picked up and what relevance it
has in the future. What is Sesshoumaru going to do with Kagome? I thought it funny how Sesshoumaru thinks he will mold
Rin into what he wants her to be. All in all good concept, original style of writing, great characterization, and smooth flow.
Till next update. Ras.
has in the future. What is Sesshoumaru going to do with Kagome? I thought it funny how Sesshoumaru thinks he will mold
Rin into what he wants her to be. All in all good concept, original style of writing, great characterization, and smooth flow.
Till next update. Ras.
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It has possibilities and my interfullfully. Please e-mail me if you continue, I'd love to review when there is more of a story to do so on. ^-~ I'll be back.