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PLEEEASSSE MORE!!! You're going great guns so far! I have high hopes for this story, I've read and re-read it and read it again. I like the stories that delve into the charaters thoughts (keeping them true to the original author's personalities), I am especially intersted with any that tries to enterain usSessSesshoumaru's disposition. Does Sessh have one arm or both? Not to run with your story or maybe out guess it, but yours could be an open door for Sessh to have to confront his psychogenisis as to why he detests humans so much, and that reals him into a series of mental tormoil because that's his hurdle in order to wield the Tetsusaiga. Oh, and I'm one who nglyngly supports that Sesshoumaru would be out of charater if he gave any admiration or desire to anyone who didn't earn it in some way (that's where it becomes interesting to hear writer's come up with different theories how he changes). One very slight critic though, revealing how the environment around them effects them, if any.

Antisipating the UPDATE! I'm sure it will be good.

very nice, so far. the plot needs to move a little faster, but it looks promising - good job!

lol, nah, it's not easy. but it is meant to be fun. I have great fun when I write. The problem is, finding time to write. lol.
Now about this chapter, applause! very well done. I am not a fan of first person speaking but this story has me liking it.
This chapter was very good. Very in character, something I have so much trouble with. I sense the coldness of Sesshomaru
and the despair of Kagome. Rin's private thoughts was a great touch. Got to go, till next update, Ras.

Your back! Yay!!! Can't type much now but please update soon.

Very good, once again. There are a few grammar mistakes, but nothing major. e yoe you update again soon.
Later - Crash

Not bad. but you're using the wrong 'Fowl' It should be Foul meaning bad. Fowl is a bird. Bascially you wrote that the servants where washing the bird smell off Kagome rather than the nasty smells.

another great addition! Can't wait for another addition! Update soon please!

i really hate him yet i love him so much. strange huh? o well. the story's good cept i hate the fact that inuyasha is dead. that's the only thing i hate. did rin pick up the shikon no tama? it'd b kool if she did. o well keep writing. ja na

keep it up and update soon

sniff, sniff, Must have more soon! This is just way to good to tease us like this. I can't imagine how Kagome is going to have a change of heart after witnessing Inu Yasha's murder by Sesshoumaru no less. Updas sos soon as you can, TTFN!