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by Chiruken

person Kaye
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was good. I knew it couldn't be Kagome cause he said he must have wanted her since he first saw her. Reallod sod so keep it up!
person MysticInca
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
tee hee, that was great! A wonderful twist at the end with Kikyo. I don't know why so many people hate her, I'd be a little pissed too if I was suddenly resurrected into a body of clay. But anyway, wonderful little ficcy totally loved it!

Mystic
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cool
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cool um......... i fo wha what i was gonna
person iforgot
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cool um......... i forgot what i was gonna say.....
person Pia Bartolini *with really annoying acrylic nails*
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*looks slightly nervous*



Um...I love you darlin, I love Inuyasha fiction, and I love canon. I hate my nails, I hate the miko slut, and I hate alternate pairings.




*legs starts bouncing* um.....don't want to shoot you down, the writing, itself, it really excellent. The premise is very good, and I'm positive it will progress nicely. But....but....I JUST CAN'T BARE TO READ IT! *sighs* I'l make myself suffer, because it IS a good story....but WHY HER?! *collapses in sobbing heap*


Its just too much for this Kagome-lover to bare!


*dies*





*spontanteously ressurects and Happy Hamster dances over to Wandering for a lil dose of Bi-Kenshiny goodness*
person DelKaidin
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad you put the author's note.... otherwise I'd have been upset with puppy.... Excellent.
person Panthera
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE H-E-L-L WERE U THINKING!!!!!!!!!!! OMG when I started reading this story it was soooooooo good I almost peed in my pants and then at the end IT SAID KYKIO and i was like what the HELL!!!!! Im sorry but you know how many flames ur gonna get just because of that little word? If it was Kagome then u would be riding in smode water! and everybody would love you, don't get me wrong I really liked it but minus the kykio part. Reality time NO BODY LIKES HER!!!!!!! everybody thinks she is a B****. and u are such a great writter ur exeotional 2 everybody else! omg i would have recomended this story 2 people but then I saw the kykio thing and im thinking non of my friends like her INCLUDING ME!!!!!! Please change this and I will keep reviewing im sorry if this may seem like a flame but IT IS! omg im sooooooooo sorry and I feel really bad but I have 2 warn u before u get filled with flames and I don't wanna see such talent as urs go 2 waist.

~Panthera~
person Panthera
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE H-E-L-L WERE U THINKING!!!!!!!!!!! OMG when I started reading this story it was soooooooo good I almost peed in my pants andn atn at the end IT SAID KYKIO and i was like what the HELL!!!!! Im sorry but you know how many flames ur gonna get just because of that little word? If it was Kagome then u would be riding in smode water! and everybody would love you, don't get me wrong I really liked it but minus the kykirt. rt. Reality time NO BODY LIKES HER!!!!!!!(kykio i mean) everybody thinks she is a B****. and u are such a great writter ur exeotional 2 everybody else! omg i would have recomended this story 2 people but then I saw the kykio thing and im thinking non of my friends like her INCLUDING ME!!!!!! Please change this and I will keep reviewing im sorry if this may seem like a flame but IT IS! omg im sooooooooo sorry and I feel really bad but I have 2 warn u before u get filled with flames and I don't wanna see such talent as urs go 2 waist.

~Panthera~
person animechick262003
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There is nothing wrong with you using kikyo. This is YUR fic and you can write what u PLZ!!!! this is and adult site and the childish notion that yove tve to write what others like is absurd. You can't please everyone so do yur thing!!!! And I have no problem with the one shot I thought it was excellent! Keep Going!! ^__^