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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhh my...... this fic has some serious issues..... not only gramaticly but...... ahmm the plot sucks... all this shit about this girl being nothing at all and sesshoumaru owning her.... and i quote "Oh no she didn't have feelings, you can hurt her, toss her, love her
and she can't feel anything. She was a servant, she does what ever
her master wants her to do." Issues man..... Issues... you've got some serious issues to right something like this... the woman has no dignaty no self pride in herself or body.... i just read the first chap. so if you were planning on character development in the other chapters then fine.... but this sucked sorry but it did. Sorry for the flames..... i can be evil like that sometimes..... hope your next story is better ^_^
and she can't feel anything. She was a servant, she does what ever
her master wants her to do." Issues man..... Issues... you've got some serious issues to right something like this... the woman has no dignaty no self pride in herself or body.... i just read the first chap. so if you were planning on character development in the other chapters then fine.... but this sucked sorry but it did. Sorry for the flames..... i can be evil like that sometimes..... hope your next story is better ^_^
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was .....umm...interesting. I hope you update soon
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice story!!! There were a few gramatical errors, but overall nicely written and nice style! Can't wait to read more!
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey there fuzzy! I liked your story a lot. Hope you update soon I want to see what happens. I like how you have Rin with Naraku, thats something I have never seen before... but is this a Sesshy/Kag, Rin/Naraku or what? Well just tell me about it then, I have to go. Ja!
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November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was great!loved it!Iwonder what the next chappy is gonna b like! I personaly hope it ends up with Inuyasha killing that undead bitch,fucks kagome senseless,and in the prosses mate which ends in her turning youkai and sesshomaru b'n turned into a slave.hehehehehehehehehehehehehehe! i'm wicked!e-mail me soon and as soon as i finish the story i'm writi'n i'll send it 2 ya. i post all of my stories after i write them so that i don't keep the other fans wati'n.c'ya!!!!!!!!
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November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I still love this story..been a long time but I know how it can be when your comp goes down and you have to use another one I hated when mine crashed I was like having fits cause the loaner I got wouldnt let me stay on the darn web for more than 10 min at a time..sigh anyhow Im glad your back and updating..soo does Sess end up having a thing for Kag or will Inu end up with her or will she end up with no one?? must know update soon k?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!! IT'S TIME TO UPDATE!!!
I read the irst 2 chappies....now I need the rest!!!
I read the irst 2 chappies....now I need the rest!!!
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like thustartt finyrious to find out more!
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
write more! (demanding ain't I? hehe) I really like what you have here so far, and want to read more, so update soon please.
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, I love it! Is this I/K at all?