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The lemon was pretty good, but I do have a complaint. The dialogue and the thoughts are... a bit out of character, except for Kaede. Also, I highly doubt that Kagome would call Inuyasha 'Inu'.

wow. i liked that. but one thing bothers me. O.o they did it out in the open? wouldnt keade or the villagers seen them? i mean you could of have inu taken kagome deeper into the forest. and wouldnt they be covered in mud? >.>; muddy mating. wow talk about strange. oh well it your story and your idea. i liked it though!

Ooh, an Inuyasha and Kagome fic and I'm the first one to review too. Well, normally I'd try to stay clear of such fics since I'm an avid Sesshoumaru and Kagome fan, but for some reason your story's summary drew me in. I guess it had to do something with the mentioning of the word mud. I know what your think. This person needs some serious help, which your probably right, but that's never doing to happen. Anyway, this fic was totally awesome. Especially the part where Inuyasha says that he was a fool for waiting so long. Ne, he can be such an idiot sometimes. Thanks again for decided to write this fic. I do hope you decide to write another one.

And so ends the Kikyo turture.... Yipeeee!!! Inuyasha and Kagome on yon you know I always love those..... Good job!!! Mules

I like it....do you plane a sequel?
congratulations

well that was origional please more

Ummm....what can I say? This is definately a new take on Inu and Kag. The only thing I haven't seen yet is an oil massage. But then again that would open a number of doors for any hentai's out there who have as sick a mind as I do from time to time. LOL. Or better yet...a jello bath. Okay, I'll shut up and go away now. *evil grin* This was a great story, keep writing.

Nefra

Absolutely adorable...Loved it so much that it's not even funny...Write more...PLEZ?!?!