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It's nice to see the two men bonding, but I'm still not sure who I'd like to see Kagome with. But, it would be helpful if Kagome and Inuyasha did get some quality time (no pressure!!).

Argh!!!! Noooooooooo!! Please tell me it isn't so!!! Kagome cannot be with Kouga!!! *sigh*

Kagome.... who'd have thought that after knowing someone two weeks and getting laid by them, she'd turn into Kouga's "Washwoman". I think those two were made for each other and even managing to "do it" in the place that their mutual friend had let them both stay at. Real classy! If I were Inuyasha I would wish both of them well, tell them that they have 30 days to find another place to live, and go on with my life! After all Kouga wants to be all protective of Kagome so let him see what it would be like to care for someone else more than himself if he could do it. I highly doubt it. Sex may be an intimate experience but there are many things that play into a relationship. I'd really like to see Inuyasha with someone who is his equal and right now Kagome just isn't it. Another fantastic job Maggz. Your pulling the angst out in me so your writing is working its magic once again.

There are a few things Maggz that you might want to try. First off I am a man and being a man if the girl I love was having sex with one of my friends in the same house live in I wouldn't be staying there.

Second, Inuyasha & Kagome have no chemistry so it is really tough to picture them having a physical relationship it looks more like brother and sister to me.

Thirdly, Inuyasha is way to clingy I understand that he wants to win the girls heart but telling somebody that they are making a big mistake is not the way.

Finally, Kagome and her whole I love you Inuyasha but I am going to have a relationship with Koga and have sex is fine but that whole different types and levels of love just doesn't work and it makes it very tough to believe that she loves Inuyasha especially if she is having a physical relationship with Koga I mean sex is the most intimate moment between Man & Woman.

Good Luck with the rest of your Maggz.

i liked it its good and i have no clue wats going to happen next.please update soon

Your story is great!!! Love the angst and drama!!! Hopefully real life will allow you to update more often!!!!

wow. really great chapter. update again soon.

i cant believe what happened i wonder who kagome is going to do , will her relationship with inuyasha grow in to something more or will she stay with kouga icant wait for the next chapter. please update soon

Your story is awesome. Can't wait for the next update.

But I wonder if Inuyasha will push for equal time?

First I want to thank you Maggz for the Christmas present of the next chapter. I don't really know why I feel disappointed that Kouga got Kagome other than I'm a traditionalist and I was really hoping Inuyasha would somehow make Kagome think more about how she felt about their relationship. It's got to be incredibly difficult to know that the woman you love is sleeping in the next room with your best friend, and in every sense of the words "sleeping with". I thought the love scene between Kouga and Kagome was perhaps a bit short, maybe that's just me hoping that it was more of a physical need between them than anything else. After all, it's one thing to love someone but quite another to be "in love" eh? As always the writing was impecable, leaving me wanting more, much more.