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for Between The Lines

by inumag

person Robert Hobbs III
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far I have to say that I really enjoy this story. Great characterization and interation between the characters. At this point in the story I have to say that I really feel bad for both of the men in this story. There are never truely happy endings when it comes to love triangles (at least in my opinion) and I do believe that one of them is going to get really hurt by the end of this (I feel bad for Kagome as well, having to make the choice of this magnitude, but in the end unless this turns out to be a YAOI story she'll have someone). I compliment you on making me care about the characters in the story . I am also happy that this story is not cluttered with all the other characters, which at times welcomed, gives plenty of time to work with the main characters and for that I thank you. I am curious about how this will end, because it's not only about who Kagome will choose, it's also what happens to the other person. It wouldn't be believable to have the other character fade into the background or simply accept it so I look forward to seeing how the rest of this story turns out, so if you have the time please continue and update this story.
person Kari
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!! i want to read more right now SO UPDATE!!!!
person KogasAngel
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!!!! Please don't let Kagome leave Kouga. He is so good for her. *pant, pant* There, I got that out of my system. I really hope that you keep Kagome with Kouga. I do like Inu Yasha, but she is just so good with Kouga. Can you tell I am a huge Kouga fan yet? Anyways, update soon. Thanks :o)
person KogasAngel
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a great chapter. I am hoping for some Kag/Kouga sweetness in the next chapter. You have done such a wonderful job. I hope that you keep it Kouga/Kag. It is an excellent story.
person Bookreader9999
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep the chapters comin'. Great story!!!

[Maybe InuYasha will get his chance?]
person Ralina
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was another good chapter (I forget if I reviewed before or not)! I'm really liking your story so far. I absolutely LOVE Kouga, and there just aren't enough stories about him and Kagome. So, I was delighted when I found yours and it turned out to be good quality and really good too! So, keep up the good work. I'll be rootin' for ya.

*Ralina*
person Bookreader9999
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is still great! Hope you get to update soon!!!
person KogasAngel
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You have done such an awesome job with this story. I am a huge fan of it, and hope that you get the next chapter out soon. I love the fact that you have made Kouga so romantic and loving. Great job!!
person Dante
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, this story has so many emotional ups and downs I feel like I'm on a cruise ship. Keep up the good work
D_
person Cold Demon Lord
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have no problem with it being fiction, I just feel when it comes to love triangle reader's want the emotions to be valid and seem real but that doesn't distract from your writing and story I was just wandering if you had got a male's point of view on your story.

I look forward to seeing how you resolve the triangle and if you want my vote for couple Inu/Kag.