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for Between The Lines

by inumag

person shadowtiger
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that this is a Inuyasha/ Kagome story. That is the catagory it is under on ff.net so i hope that that is correct becasue i hated seeing the Kouga/ Kagome stuff. They really freaked me out. Kouga doesn't seem right. he would fight Inuyasha to the death for Kagome but he is accepting things way too easily to be in character. It is obvious that Kagome actually loves Inuyasha so pleas elet them end up together it is driving me nuts to see her with Kouga.
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa... sango huh? i could go w/ a kag/inu/kog myself, but inu/san is fine...
person drake220
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm dying here. i absolutely love this fic. i have to skip all the lemons b/c they're all kag/kouga sothat sort of sucks but beyond that, this fic is amazing. deep and complicated, it's a REAL story. i get the feeling of watching tv or a movie when i read this b/c everything is so articulately spelled out so that, in my minds eye, i can see what's happening. you kick ass. i just hope inu starts taking this as a man. setting some rules (such as no living togather! BAD!) but accepting everyone's advice and temporarily moving on. i want to see inu as slightly more noble then he seems here. basically, he comes off as a whiny baby and kouga's perfect. perhaps you could shake it up a little? but you got kag in a nutshell- very anti-confrontation. nicely done!
person Ilidian
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like the story, I know its gonna be a sad ending for somebody. If you do have Inu get with someone other than kagome I like Sango but thats just me (Maybe hint at it at least). I don't really think that this should end up an Inu/Kag. I just can't see that big a change in there relationship. Anyway what ever you do I think it will be as good as the rest of the story.
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O EWWW. Don't even think about turning this into an Inuyasha/Sango thing. That's even worse than Inuyasha/Kagome. Please.
person drake220
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i know your going to think this odd but i have been waiting for the story to come back b/c i didn't realize the title change. SO now i found this awesome story again but after reading this chapter, my heart is broken. honest to god, i am crying over this. poor poor inuyasha... i am crying for him. those two selfish bastards. kagome promised to not do anything and then she sleeps with kouga when inuyasha is DOWN THE HALL. that bitch. i am so dissapointed in her. vile.
person drake220
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am torn. on one hand, it's like "inu, just let the bitch LEAVE. this isn't healthy!" i just want him to be gracious about this whole thing but that's just not inu's style. one thing i have noticed it that Inu is in character and kuga is very much not. that's just the feeling i get from this. i swear, i have to skip parts when kouga nad kag get all lovey. it's just unpalatable for me. this fic is like a car wreck. horrible but facinating.
person drake220
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kudos for not having them duke it out with fists. that would have been substandard
person drake220
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THATS WHAT I WANTED!!! (though i do feel bad for kouga. i don't WANT to feel bad for him. i just do.)
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa! i really like this fic. is it really going to be inu/kag/kog? cause...inu and kog are starting to hate each other. but i want it to be all three of them. someone'll really get hurt otherwise! can't wait for the next update!!!