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for Between The Lines

by inumag

person hanyou-elf
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(shrieking) KAWAII! i love this story! it's so good. i can't wait for the next chapter! (dancing impatient dance) hurry and update this one... i think i need the next chapter! it's so awesome!

love this story!
~hanyou-elf
person mel
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that was such torture maggz, but have to say it was done very well. The funny thing, I have a lava lamp, and a rotating picture light in my room, lol. was it the alcohol that brought them together? if so CHEERS!
person ivy
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohh wow great chapter loved it please update soon and what abotu your other story shape of my heart?
person sintar
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww Maggz! Another fine fine chapter! And I don't know about the other reveiwers but I really like not knowing who she'll end up with, hell if she's lucky maybe both!!! LOL, It keeps the story riviting and exciting! I really like this story and feel lucky enough to have been able to see it from the begining! I can't wait for Innocent Beginings, but like the rest of us fellow writers, it's hard to find time to even post the work! Great Job! I can't wait for another update, for either of your stories!
person mel
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was such a tease! Maggz, your being absolutely torturous with this one, its going sooooo slow. (Truthfully, the insane anticipation is awesome, lol) Yeah, its coming great, I can't wait till the story really develops. Fantastic job so far, keep up the good work.
person ivy
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter you had me going with that dream i thought it was real (lol) i hope you keep writitng this story
person Jen
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it, Really love it!!!!! Post more soon!!!!!!
person hanyou-elf
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor kagome. i mean, come on, there's a hard decision right there to make. kouga (all in his glorious glory) or inuyasha in his purely masculine glory! i don't know what to think about that story, but i can't wait for the next update! update again! (glomps) please!
person mel
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just don't know what to say. That chapter was sooooo intense I feel dazed having read it! This is definately one fo your best works yet, pleeeeeez post the next chapter as soon as you can. Thankyou.
person mel
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! This chapter was so amazing, and so sexxxy. The way they describe eachother is just so beautifully done. Wow, this is so awesome. PLeeeeeeeeez update ASAP!