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for Between The Lines

by inumag

person vashta
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, but I still don't know if I even want her with Koga. Who is she going to end up with? Can't you give me a hint. I am sure it is far from over. I have never read a story where I actually didn't know who I preferred her to be with. You are doing a great job.
person drake220
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
brilliantly done!!!! BRAVO!!!! you avoided the cliche and made it into a plot development point! theres much more going on in kagome and you showed it through kouga's erection!! (jeex, was that dirty or was it DIRTY!?!!?!?!?! god, i love myself....) loved it!
person Korinna
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gosh it's getting intense >>; What's going to happen?? I hope you update soon, been really into this story and you're doing a magnificent job!n Til' next update.. Hope it's soon!
person ivy
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, very interesting , finaly inuyasha and kouga confronted each other but i still want to knoe kagome's feelings about both of them . i really dont knoe who i want her to end up with cause i like them both. please update soon your killing me here(lol)
person Lisa
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.

I like the interaction between the chracters, the progression of the story, and I like how Inuyasha realizes he might be missing something with Kagome.

Can't wait for you to continue it.

Hope you don't get writer's block!! Keep up the good work!!!
person mojop
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAHHH SO GOOD! Update! Are you still posting on mediaminer.org?
person mel
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was soooo intense. I nearly got teary-eyed from that one. That was awesome maggz. Please update soon. later.
person animelo
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job! More please
person tokoharu
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out to be another wonderful story. The character portrayals are very compelling as are all of your character story lines. Was wondering just what it would take to get a reaction out of Inuyasha and it looks like now Kouga knows exactly what he wants. Its going to be a wild ride for Kagome and Inuyasha especially since they have kept their feelings bottled up for so long. On some level I can see Kagome being content with Kouga. Could he make her happy, really happy? Only you know that Maggz. Thanks so much for the quick update on this chapter, you are the Master Storyteller!!
person mofaf1
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
looks like there is a little cat fight going on between the puppy and the wolf...gotta wonder who is gonna win