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for Between The Lines

by inumag

person Emerald*Dragon
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!! Lol update again soon!

Emmy*D
person mofaf
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the yummy lemon but poor Inu is going to be devistated.

person Emerald*Dragon
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Errr! how could u just leave it like that? Please update soon!

Emmy*D
person Lisa
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awesome! I constantly check to see if it's updated.

Can't wait for you to continue.

person vashta
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have decided that I definitely want her with IY, he loves her! Kouga just lusts her. I know, I know, I am not the author. Good show.
person Shadiyaray
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And the Drama starts!
person drake220
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
honest to god, and i know this sounds patheitc, but this chapter AFFECTED me! i feel so bad for inuyasha, my heart feels broken. i'm crying, i really am. i just want to take him in my arms and tell him it'll be all right but....i can't even hate kouga! he's so sweet and kagome likes him so much! its so hard! but poor inu's heart is broken! stupid kagome, i want to throttle her but then again, she's only human (sorta) and she can't help it! kouga's sweet and loveable and drawing her out of her shell and inu couldn't for some reason do that- i honestly don't know which guy i'm rooting for. i always love inu/kag and usually loathe kag/kouga fics but this triangle is so deep, i really can't just spit out which one i like...man, UPDATE!!! this is killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
poor inu baby. i just want him to be happy... However, i must stipulate for gods sake, don't make him be with kikyo!! i beg of you, that would be a coward's way out!! love the fic, i feel it, i really do.
person Tokoharu
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I so love Kouga angsty! Inuyasha is usually the one without much control over emotions, but Kouga's impatience and possesiveness seem to make his character quite needy. The fact that Inuyasha's feelings seem more guarded only adds to his appeal within this story. I'm really enjoying the way Kouga seems so vulnerable to everything Kagome does, it almost makes me wonder if he really feels love or lust. I don't know if Kagome will be able to remain her own woman once she gives into Kouga. I feel the frustration in both Inuyasha and Kouga but more so for Inuyasha. Admitting his love for Kagome to himself had to be quite an epiphany for him. Talk about loving someone so selflessly that your only concern is their happiness......heavy stuff!! Maggz your writing style just pulls me right in and I can never seem to get enough of your talent.
person drake220
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::stares at inuyasha:: has he LOST HIS MIND!?!?!?!??!?!
holy shit, inu no baka.....good lord, the shit is gonna HIT the fan
person mel
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was the most intense stuff I have ever read. I am nearly out of breath having just read it! I love how you have drawn the characters here. I am soooo jelous of Kagome, grrrrrrrr. Please update soon! Thanks a bunch.