rate_review Reviews

Okay i loved your story for three reas 1. 1. the beggining how ever you can up with such a clever funny, and true to story beggining is beyond me
2. the lemon, aw come on anyone else who read that lemon must have thought it was good the dialoge and all were sweet and tender and cute
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3. The ending funny as all hell i was laughing b/c you get out of this sweet tender moment to her her family making bets on there continuing genology ha ha

well love your work
peace
kagome rain

lol Ive read this story before I k onk on the Church..and its still an awsome one shot lemon I soo love it..dang where can I get me a bow and arrrow and a hunky Inu??? great job..ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

all the Omake I've ever seen have left me crying with laughter *mind you I've only seen the one's from Fushigi Yuugi and Blue Seed* ok now you got me thinkin about how funny it would be to have Kagome's grandpa chasing Inuyasha back to the well with a broom in one and and the ofuda in the other *giggles* and Kagome stuck in her room glowing red blushing from being caught...ok well great lemon please write some more lemons

Gorgeous... Just gorgeous... with a true Takehashian ending... is that a word? Anyway, AWESOME keeping in character (I know it's hard with lemons, but you did an exceptional job) and I really liked that mention of Miroku. Great story!

OH YEAH!!! Nothing like a killer one shot... Very well writen too... I might add... I enjoyed it greatly GOOD JOB!!!!

Wow! This story was perfectly executed, even at the end when Kagome's family commented on her being the legendary miko. Maa, will you be continuing with this fic? I would love to read more.