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March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!
Great, great story. Good dialogue, good scenery, great descriptions... and then that hilarious end to tie it all together!
Easily one of my favorite InuYasha oneshots. Thank you for the great ficlet!
Great, great story. Good dialogue, good scenery, great descriptions... and then that hilarious end to tie it all together!
Easily one of my favorite InuYasha oneshots. Thank you for the great ficlet!
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHA
that's TERRIBLE!! lol *in a good way* They were fucking watching?
damn.
You should add a sequel.
that's TERRIBLE!! lol *in a good way* They were fucking watching?
damn.
You should add a sequel.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved it! *snickers* I wonder what Kagome would think if she knew that they had been watching. Which reminds me... why on earth were they watching? I mean... that's just a little wrong, counting on the fact that they're family members.
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was funny, if a bit gross at the end. souta's part was funny, the fact that her mom adn grandfather listened in is sort of disturbing
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's me again. I must say that you really did a good job with Kagome and Inuyasha's personalities. Some authors make Inuyasha soind ind of sex machine and to me this is very, very wrong. It gets really strange when in such stories he blushes when Kagome simply touches him and in the next moment he is ready to jump on her, don’t you think? Anyway, good work! And I think you should make another story like ‘Archery’ and ‘Rain’.
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I liked it! Especially the Omake! I love those when they are written well! LOL, ROTFLMAO! Heh heh! ^_^ Anyhoo, until next time! ^_^
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December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA HA omg that endding was funny and the rest of it was well i am really really happy now.
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October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was cool!
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was great writ more
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, defiantly one of my favorite Inu&Kag lemons!