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Truthfully I loved your story so sad and on such a tender topic of love, life and the inevitable death a real tear jerker I was so sad at the end cause your metaphors of the forest and snow and oh my it was all so sad and wonderful i really enjoyed it the Evanesence touch was also perfect really makes one think well keep it up
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kagomerain

omg..that was totally great!!!..sad very sad but really really good, I know its a one shot and all but soo many things are left unsaid and unanswered..sniffles..what possessed Inu to rape Kagome??? I never that he would do that to her,,sniffles and shes prego??? and then she shoots at him with the arrow and you stop??? waaaaaaaaaaahhhhh no fair I wanna know what happens..sniffles...I know I know it was a one shot so I wont beg anymore..well much..hehe but really it was wonderfull..it was good..ty for sharing that with us..much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

oooh my bad...sheesh I thought there was only one chap..hehe (blushesll Ill I read what my very cool friend Mules wrote in her review and she said two chaps and I was like WHAT??? went back and yup it was there...soooooooo Kagome killed Inu??? awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sniffles sobs..ok he raped her and was doing it again I know this but nooo me loves Inu..sniffles..ok ok..Im calm...again another great chap, but whos the voice?? hmmmm me wonders..and does this mean there will be more to this story??? (crosses fingers and hopes sooo) please let there bre are and btw....waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah..inu and kagome's baby is dead??? sniffles..soo soo sad..again great writing luv it keep going and when ya write another lemme know k?? ty ty ty huggles Mija..:-)

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep I loved this. PLus that is my fav evanescence song, they rock in concert. Keep up the good work :D

I think you really should do more, because it's actually a very good start to a story, especially since you said Kagome was pregnant.

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I thought they were both good chapters even though I don't know the s or or have them to listen to... I think you should keep going...

In honesty? It was a bit unrealistic. I've heard the song (it kicks ass), and I would've probably put it more towards a Kikyo-haunting-Inu Yasha-type songfic, but that's just me, y'know. It was decent, nonetheless. Good first attempt on a lemon.