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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, your writing style is very nice. I thought your story so far is very well written. I guess the only thing that bothered me was that one day Kouga rapes Nikah and the next they are are getting along like two peas in a pod. Didn't seem very natural or healthy for that matter on Nikah's part. But it is your story and to each their own, other than that I thought you did an excellent job.
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
another good chap... Koga is going to be pissed... I love the look in his eyes when he is mad.... Yummy... alrighty then... calming down here...lol... Until next update.... Mules
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You really have to give kouga son for a child guys rule!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Chap.... bravo... bravo... I soooo love Kougo.... He will make a fine Mate and Father... lol... This is a good story and I look forward to more Chaps.... thanks so much for the update.... I sooo love updates.... Love and Smiles :) ... Mules
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September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the great Lord Sesshoumaru would never stoop down to the level or kidnapping a human and kill them later. he would kill them on the spot. ^_O
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September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey (waves) I like the new chap and bringing Sesshoumaru in was a cool call in my book because I just love him so... But come to think of it I love them all...lol... anyway I think what ever twist you put on the story will be a good one... I Love Sessy as a bad guy or good guy I just love him in any wrape he comes in...lol.. anyway wish you luck on twisting it real good.... Mules
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September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really good story so far!! I think you should make Sess the bad guy is this one, because you're right, it would be a good twist. I also think you have got the bringInu Inu & Kag, it's not fun without them! Anyway, great story so far
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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Grrrrr... that Kaugo.... but then you got to give him an... Ahhhhh.... I so love him and he will love her... I just kit..it.... So just wondering is it over or will we get to read about them falling in love.... Please post again soon... I like this story and I just know he was doing what he had to do and she will relize it too... Ok enough babbaling..... Mules
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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, A Kouga fic!!!!!!!!! I wish people woud write more of these.
I like the beginning of your fic, and I hope you post ch 2 soon.
I like the beginning of your fic, and I hope you post ch 2 soon.