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by DelKaidin

person ME
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! I was going to suggest continuing shortly after this one---you know, the fun of a new relationship--all the 'heat'^_~, besides finding out exactly what went on during the time they were apart--what exactly happened 15 years ago, etc---but I suppose a few months down the line could answer just as much. Maybe a 'shortly after' with a 'what's going to happen in the future' ending^_^ I know, that answer means both!!! whichever you choose, I will read!!!!! please update soon!
person MomOfFluffyAndFluffier
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
why not 2 chappies

1. one a short time later (a day or two) for the immediate reaction of both involved (kinda 'the morning after')

2. then one several weeks later (especially if Kagome finds herself pregnant...afterall she isn't married).

Quick question. Is Inu Yasha still alive in Kagome's time? (Thereis a chance of him being alive still since he is hanyou, it may be that he just hasn't found her yet) If so, will he show-up to be with her in her time?
person raven
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written!
person No One Knows
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start! Hope to see more very soon
person animechick262003
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I lliked very...very much..is this a one shot or is there more to come cuz....I WANT MORE!!! There just aren't enough WELL written Inuyasha/Kag lemons and yours is excellent!!
person Mija
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh my that was soooo gooill ill there be further chaps or is this a one shot?? ooh I hope theres more, does Inu have a mate?? well I dont think he would since he would mate for life and not be with Kagome if he had one right? But what will happen next?? will she stay with him or go back home?? and awww her mom and grandpa are gone?? soo sad for her..anyhow I loved it please put another chap but either way it was a great chapter I luved it..:-) huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person ApriL
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Haha, cooL? I Liked using the Language thingy majiggies.