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for Desire

by DelKaidin

person TAJE
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Good! I think you have something going here. Keep up the good work!
person Ks-Starshine
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I saw you mention it in your journal and thought I'd check it out. I am so glad I did! I culdn't read this on fanfiction.net, where I usually follow your stories. This was written so well! You captured their emotions with every situation wonderfully, making it romantic, and not just a story about sex. put put feeling behind it. I hope it does well in the voting! Good luck!
person Liz
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! Thats soooooo cute!!! lol... ::tear:: Is that the ending??? I wants more now....lol Please tell me thats not the ending..... even if it is... thats a great story!! lol.. if you do update it... Email me Please ::gets down on knees and begs::

~Liz~
person psycho
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story update soon
person Shadow Wolf
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! that was great!
person shaina
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. That was such an amazing love scene. More please. What do they decide to do next?
person shaina
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue i'm loving the story. Want to know happens next please?
person dragonflyelj
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love it! this was so sweet, and Inu sounded so damn hot in this too! lol. Oh, and lets not forget the little lemon there, Damn! that was hot, hehe.
person shaina
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was incredably amazing! Please write more. I love your work. Please continue the story, I'll be watching for the next part.
person Kya
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story and put a new lemony chapter in it...I absolutely -love- this story! It's a view into Inu's more sensitive, loving side, and thank God for that! Absolutely beautiful job...Update pleaze!! n__n