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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person liberatedmysterygirl
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I NEED A SEQUEL
person rawben
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. this was really good. amazing. i loved it. but i really need a sequel!!! please!!! and how long before you do it? how long to you expect it to take? and i loved this dark fic, but honestly, if too much more happens to that girl (in the seq) i'll lose it. i assume naraku'll be back since he didn't die. but come on. hasn't she been though enough? *pout* also! the rin/sess lemon for that better be awfully fluffy!

but yeah. great fic.
person Fireminx
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I was on the edge of my seat and biting my nails throughout this entire chapter. That was one powerful ending! I can't wait for the sequel! AWESOME!!!
person Suicidal Ducky
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, when is there a sequel?! awww! must have sequel! this is BY-FAR the best story i've read on FF.NET. congrats to u. must make sequel! please! i'ma cry! *sniffle*
person liberatedmysterygirl
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi i love this story so much and you had finished it but now all the other chapters you had are gone, are you rewriting the story ? also i wanted to ask you to please update the courting of rin i love that story aswell and would love to see the end
person Wolf Gothicka {To lazy to sign in}
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! Plz don't stop it there! I have to know what happens next!!
There's NO way you can just stop there! PLZ write more of this story soon!!
Wolf Gothicka
person animegirl007
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Are you back? please tell me you're back? the flock needs your're stories....I so need the sequel to this one and the courtship of Rin... please tell me you're back....I need you back ...update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
person Sandra
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story of yours. When are you going to continue this sequel?
person mina
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make a sequel :D
person Kioki
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Someone can't spell, or edit, one or the other. There are typos everywhere. They make the story hard to read. Please fix. Well, I guess it really doesn't matter; I've already read this story once, and am now waiting for a sequel.. But for those who haven't read this story yet, you might want to fix it. Get spellcheck or something....

Also, Scarecrow, could you email me with te answer to this: What was up with Sesshy? Why did he bute her like that? I figured it was becuase she was a female and so close to him, and smelling scared and stuff, and it turned him on. But why was he angry at the same time? Kioki is confused...