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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person Ms. Ikumi
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are very talented, this is not like most Inuyasha fanfictions. I am very interested to see what happens. Your way with words is amazing. Good luck, and keep on writing! ^_^
person Ms. Ikumi
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*clap clap clap clap* I am most impressed!!!
person flowers
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, please. For the love of pete, post the rest of your story and it's sequel. I've been checking you for updates like it's my new religion. You hold me in awe. Your style is simple and captivating, subtle and assaulting at the same time. I really can't get enough of you. Do an old-girl a favor and update anything/everything. I follow your stories on ff.net as well. I think I'm going to send you a pic of me on my knees, and you should make that your avatar because that is what you've done to everyone. Always begging for more.
person L.A.
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Shippo! Naraku is sick, man... definitely a character to be feared in this story. He doesn't get any better in the anime, from what I've been told and the little I've seen... :( Anyway, great chapter!

L.A.
person L.A.
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. This story is definitely twisted, lol. I so enjoy it! Naraku is a sick bastard. You did a fine job with this chapter, kudos!!

L.A.
person L.A.
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I can't wait to see how Sesshomaru decides to help Rin. Also, why do I have this strange feeling that Naraku is her 'father?' Anyway, I love what I've read so far!

L.A. (Author of The Matchmaker, and The Deadly Game)
person L.A.
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I love your descriptions, and just the way you write. You're obviously a talented and practiced writer. Great story!

L.A.
person Anon
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How did I know it was Naraku? I guess since he's the only dispicable hanyou in the anime? lol. Anyway, still going strong... love it!

L.A.
person L.A.
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chains and collars? Electric shock? Damn, poor Rin... hopefully, Sesshomaru finds her before that, eh? Still enjoying it!

L.A.
person DarkLady
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bah i stayed up late and you stoped there!!!!! UPDATE!