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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great cha! I ! I feel so very sorry for Rin. Maybe now that Sesshomaru is getting more and more glimpses of what she goes through, he will soon help her. I am curious to what their relationship will be like; like in the manga/anime, or will there be different emotions? Either way, I'm looking forward to the next chapters. And the hanyou... Naraku perhaps?
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If this were not so well writen, I would have a very difficult time reading it. As it is, I am having a very difficult time reading it, because it is so well written, I cringe at the blood on her, and the scars on her, but I can't wait for her circumstances to turn better. How old was she when Naraku kidnapped her? She is still on Sesshoumaru's property, so what is he going to do? He should kill the Hanyou for treating the girl this way, and forcing him to empathize with a damn human! LOL. Update soon!
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going. I like the way the story is shaping out. More please ^_^
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is very disturbing obviously, even though it's about fictional characters, it really upsets me. I guess that speaks to your writing abilities. The story is very well written. I haven't read about a character this creepy in a long time.Looking forward to more, please save Rin as soon as possible though.
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good Job!! You keep posting and I'll read. ^__^
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September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is SUCH a good fic!!! I love it! Please please please please write the next chapter SOON!!!
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September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
u only have 1 chapter! :( i want u 2 keep going!
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor rin... great story! Update soon!
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww....PRin.Rin.
That would be horrible to to have a father like that.
This is a sad story. I hope Sesshy comes to the rescue.
But the way he acted to Rin, Isn't a good start.
*sigh* Ohh....well, Keep up the good work on both of your stories.
I can't wait. ^_~
That would be horrible to to have a father like that.
This is a sad story. I hope Sesshy comes to the rescue.
But the way he acted to Rin, Isn't a good start.
*sigh* Ohh....well, Keep up the good work on both of your stories.
I can't wait. ^_~
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't tell me Naraku is Rin's father. How gross. Read your first chapter and it looks interesting. Can't wait for next update