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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person maazka
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
luved this story. i was supposed to go to bed like 2 hours ago but i just couldnt put this down(so to speak) sess went oc rather quickly but it was ok. i really enjoyed it. pls get the sequal out SOON!!!
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You haven't forgotten us have you??? I'm begging BEGGING, please please continue. I've been religiously checking your stories since last year. You have such a talent, please let me partake of it once again. You better hurry before I start writing sonnets of love in your honor and spamming your reviews with my undying devotion!
person Danica
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done! So...when do we get a sequel? :)
person plainandsimplegirls
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know.......this would really be a very, very good story, I mean off the hook if not for one thing. What the hell is up with the....and he stuck it in my........and it hurt me in my..........!!!!!!!! What the fuck is all that? If you're going to write a NC-17 story. Write one and stop the the teasing shit. If you can't say and write the words, you will neve rbecome a true writer. Your readers want to know what you are thinking not leaving it to our imagation. Tell me a story and either make me hot and mad because of the way this man is treating this child or make me close the pages and say......fuck this shit. If I wanted to guess about a story I would read a math book.
person kiara703
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great.............so when's the sequel. need to know what happens next...........................
person Mmoirai
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! Was that it!!!! I....I....I must have sequel...*gasp*....dying....aghhh!!!! I am looking forward to your sequel and will be checking for it often. In the meantime, thank-you for the emotional rollercoaster ride!
person 1WishAway
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Very captivating. I can't wait for the sequel! There is a sequel right?
person 1WishAway
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't read to many dark stories but once I started reading this one I couldn't stop. You are such an exquisite and talented writer. This story is very addicting and intruiging. So far, I think it is excellent, and I trust that the rest of it will be excellent as well. Thanks for the great read.
person The crazy one
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You'd better put a sequel cause the story kicks-ass. It was very dark and sometime made me sick but it worked out better at the end. I was in tears. I repeat myself, you'd better put a sequel or I'll be upset.
person sphinx
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when will the sequel be comin?