rate_review Reviews

WOW... Your are becoming one of my favs... Thanks for the update... I loved it... very well written... I might add... I enjoy this story greatly.. I had to read the frist chap again because you waited so long to update... Please don't do that again...LOL... I am still thinking the father is Naraku even though you didn't mention a spider mark on his back and now I am wondering how he got his hands on Rin in the first place. Does she truely believe it is her father... Is he deseving her... What will Sess do when she gets giddy over catching a fish to eat... will his heart melt more... and you mentioned Inu so is he coming in also... WOW you have my brain working ovime ime here... anyway GREAT story... GREAT update... DAMN GREAT JOB!!!! .... Mules

WOW!! What a story line, cant wait until the next chapter

I enjoy the second chapter just as much as the first. Looking forward to reading Chapter 3. Update very, very soon.

Absolutely wonderful so far! The story line is good and I really like the way you write Sess and Rin. Hope to see more soon

Damn that Naraku,Sesshoumaru better take care of him and fast, Poor Rin

Is Rin's so called father Naraku?
I was waiting for your update all week... your story is great... so... pleaseeeeeee... update soon!

Mmaann...this is a sad story.
I would've ki the the *supposedly* father by now.
If I see or hear anything like that, I swear I'll kill the person that did thta to them.
I reallt hope Sess comes and actually saves Rin form this nightmare.

I dont want to sound sick or anything, but how does the *supposedly* father hurt Rin? Like in the *cough*bed*cough* and the bruises?
That had been bothering me ever since I started reading this story.

Well, Keep up the good work. ^_~

oh my gosh.... i couldnt stop reading it ......i cant wait to see what happens next!! i love to read fanfictions and so far yours are the best!!!

Wow, that was. . . intense. you need to update this story, i mean i am literally dying to know what happens next . . .damn . . .

That is so sad. I really hope Sesshoumaru saves her. Well worth the wait. Its so moving and original. I can't wait for the next chapter!