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Well, that wasn't exactly what I was expecting... I like it thouSo, So, Sesshomaru is feeling sorry, but did he just mark ar as his? If he did so, what will he do next about her? What will he do about Naraku? Please update soon!

So what Sess did was make the Rin his mate/property? Or did he turn her into a half-demon?

|| blinks ||

Oh well. At least there was another wonderful chapter, but also sad.
But it was still good.

You dont have to worry about my earlier question.
My mind was on overload when I tried to figure it out. [ :sigh: ]

Keep up on those chapters and don't you dare forget about your other story(s)....I love them too ya know!!

Hey (waves) me again... About the bite... I didn't take it as him marking her the way I was reading it I took it as her being prey Like as in a meal or a foe that needed to be taken down... The bite thing I think is taken way out of perportion on a mating ritural... I could be wronge but now I am very curious to find out... He didn't bite her in the heat of passion he bit her in a heat of rage... Anyway I was reading the reviews and they got me thinking... Damn don't you just hate that...lol... anyway I guess we whavehave to wait untill the next update that hopefuly (fingers crossed) won't be to long... I love this fic so much I love the darkness of it... Oh and about what the father (Naraku) was doing to Rin I thought that also came across very clear... I thought there were plenty of details to lead the reader in right direction... OH MY am I rambaling... I just can't help myself it is hard to find dark fics and believe me you I Love them... Does that say something bad about me... I wonder... OH Well ... I love my lemmons too... anyway please please please update this and the courting of Rin as soon as life permits.... thanks again for listening to me ramble.... your faithful fan... Love and :)'s .... Mules

This story is wonderfully well written and entertaining though distressing in ways (I expected that when I realized daddy was Naraku). Please let this be a dark fic only because of Naraku...let Ses be the hero behind his cold mask...Rin doesn't deserve to be so badly treated without any kind of hope for happiness (even if Ses just rescues her from Naraku he will be a definite hero). Hope to see an update soon.

OMG... This was so sad... But this was such an engrossing chapter... You had me on the edge of my seat! I can't wait for the next chapter... This is such an amazing story! Excellent writing.

Later...

OHHHH MYYYY GODDDD!!! I absolutely loveeeee this story. I can see what you are writing. If you can catch me on the first few words then I am hooked and I am definetly hooked !! Please please please let me know when you update this story. I cannot wait to see what you are going to do next. I felt Rin's pain and I felt Shesshomaru's disgust. Keep up the great work !!!!

This is a very interesting story. I love the way it is heading, can't wait for the update. Keep up the good work!!!

This Naraku guy should get his ass-whipped by Sesshomauro several times over.

yay, more sess/rin stories, there is never enough with these too. They are so kawaii together! Poor Rin though...gob her supposed father" kinda seems like Naraku ne? Welp keep going and I hope Sess-sama saves her in more ways then one soon enough...

*sniff sniff* Poor Rin...I've never a read fic that has her going thru such pain...*sniff* I want to read more tho! Update soon!