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I'm speechless. It was so dark and animalistic...wow. You're kind of Storytelling is fantastic! ^^ *waits for the next chapter*

Yay! a new chapter. What will Sesshoumaru do? he can't send her back to her father with his teethmarks in her neck. And he has to be feeling some guilt for biting her. You must update soon!

Reading Chapter 3 almost made me cry. To reaat Rat Rin was going to sell her body as payment hurt my heart and also disgusted me to know that, that all she knows to survive. I also wanted you to answer my question whether by emailing me or answering it at the end of the next chapter. Did Sesshoumaru "saved" Rin by accidently claimed her;and by claiming her does she have to return to that place she calls "home"!!?? I would like to know if possible

Another fantastic story. THis is by far the best chapter so far, if you ask me. You also have amazing talent - almost inhuman - that I had to stop many times during this chapter... I had to stop and just take a deep _long_ breath, followed by a mental 'Wow' before continuing to the next part. And your ability to pay attention to emotemotion and create such depth blows me completely away. Truly a breath-taking chap. The part where Sesshoumaru lost control was written so wonderfully and it's what has me loving this chapter so much.

All in all, beautiful detail, amazing twists, wonderful character protrayals and great writing... 10/10 Later...

I haven't read Chapter three yet I just wanted to say THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!! It seems I have been waiting for ever for this update... He He... Just want to get the excitment out of way... I sure hope that tells you how much I LOVE THIS fic.... Mules

Oh don't worry I'll hang around to find out... you've got me hooked now. Sesshomaru!!! Bad puppy.

OH My... I just can't explain in mere words how much I truely enjoy this story. I Hold my breath every time I need to scroll down and as for stop writing it I hope that thought never crosses your mind again.. This was the best Chap yet... your words flow like magic and keep me pinned to the edge of my seat. Wanting and Needing more... The chapters always seem to end at the right time too... that Cliffy moment with the last few words spoken... OH MY!!! you always leave me with a pounding heart... Please do continue with this story... You have a great talent and I wish you all the luck in the world to take it beyound fan fic's but only after you complete the one's your writing....LOL... Mules

I really like this story so far. It maybe dark but it is worth the trip so far. I can not wait to see what is going to happen next, please update soon.

you are doing a wonderful job with this storyline and I can't wait to see what you do next with this. This is a difficult subject to deal with and you are handling it very well. My ocompcomplaint is the speed of updates, I'm so impatient to find out what happens next.

Wow, that was a powerful chapter! So when can you have the next one up.