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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person Tiranth
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Del Kaiden sent me onto this little jewel. I really cant wait for the next chapter. Ask Del, I love Sesshomaru and your write him very well here. Damn Naraku...die spider boy die!!!!!!!! Please have Sess kill him. Is oingoing to keep Rin with him? She can't go home with a big mating (yes?) mark on her!
person Fuzzy
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-gaspe- This story it soooo gooooooood O____O -tears- I wish I can write good as you -more tears-
SESSHIE WITH SAFE RINNY-CHAN FROM HER FUKED UP DAD ???? AM I RITE???
Anywiths I think the story is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>_<
person Fuzzy
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-gaspe again- Sesshi didnt r@pe Rinny ..............did he???
GOOD JOB!!!!
person No One Knows
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome
person Anne
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Please keep writing. I love the way you are writing Rin, and Sess will rule no matter what ^_^
person Berinsama56
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!!! Is Rin dead? If she is, will Sesshoumaru revive her? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Bsasami
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was shock by chapter 3. I wasn't expecting this from Sesshomaru. I know this is a dark fic, but please give this girl a break. Please continue to update.
person animechick262003
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Y SESS IS QUITE THE HUNGRY LITTLE BISCUIT EATER ISN'T HE.... LOL..JST KIDDING...I LOVED THE LATEST CHAPTER AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WRK...I WILL SAY THAT HE UNINTENTIONALLY MARKED THATS WHY HE REALLY WANTED TO KILL HER AFTER HE'D BITTEN HER CUZ NOW HE PROB HAS TO KEEP HER WITH HIM.
person golden
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my kami!!! i love your work!!!! pleaze write more ...... i am rereading the other chapters cuz i like them so much and i have never did that to a fanfiction ever!!!!
person Kin
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awesome! continue, it's making me suspenseful!