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Wow! That is a great story so far! I want to read more! The way you tell the story is awesome. The switching of views works very well. My fanfics are at fanfiction.net so they aren't as sexual, but I think that you have a great story line and everything! I hope you can update it soon and make more chappies! It will be a happy day! Thank you for an awesome story ~BlackOleandor~

Getting very good. As the other reviewers say, breathtaking....PLEASE update very soon! :)

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Can't Wait until the next chapter. Keep up the great Work.!!!!!

Endearing chapter. I hope to be seeing more of this darkly engrossing story of yours. It's always wonderful when people keep the more intense characters in check. aka, Sesshoumaru. Sometimes people tend to make him too soft, other times just don't play him out right. Wonderful chapter as always.

Later...

Your story was amazing and I must say havehave great talent. It surprised me but this story is the first one I ever read that brought tears to my eyes. Please keep up with the chapters because I really would love to find out what happens. =^.^=
P.S. thank god you cleared up that her “father” was Naraku, for a while there I was cared it was Inuyashas humanm ^.m ^.^’

Great new chapter! Hope your little brain fog clears up cause I really like this story!

Very good!! i loved it, please update soon!

Wow. That's all i can say. (well, alright, i'm lying, i can and will say more.) It's very well done. I felt truly sorry for Rin, and when Sesshomaru was first introduced, i could feel his disdain for Rin. (Or maybe i just need more sleep.) Anyhow. I liked it. And now i want more. Please?

What fog? I think this chapter was great! I am curious about the next chapter; there so many ways you can go now. Well, Rin'll probably wake up. I don't think she'll be a happy little camper. I do feel very bad for her. But I think things will get better for her now. Please update soon!

Loved the new chapter! Can't wait to see Naraku get his ass kicked! oh ya, will Inu be in this stoy or is it going to be just Sess, Rin, and Naraku? write more soon!