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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person Mistress Sakura
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that is a cliffhanger! I can't wait to find out what happens.
person lacy
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
interesting story. Please let me knwo when you update thanks
person Pallas
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist you've thrown in there at the end. Now Sesshomaru has to go looking for her. And what will Naraku do? Nothing good, I suppose. I hope you'll update soon!
person Mihoshi
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.O That was great! What an awesome story! I was just really bored earlier today and was all "Hmmm. Let's compare the number of lemons each section has." And I thought it was funny that InuYasha had, like, 450. So I clicked. This was among the first stories, and I thought it was interesting, so I read. I never knew it'd be so good. You have to write more! I gotta see what's gonna happen! Please, please, continue!
person BSASAMI
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS GOING TO BE ONE ROUGH RIDE FOR RIN HERE. I THOUGHT SHE ESCAPED FROM NARAKU TO SESSHOMARU(HOPEFULLY BETTER)TO NARAKU AGAIN. I HOPE SESSHOMARU KICKS HIS ASS AND TRIED TO SAVE RIN AGAIN. PLEASE UPDATE, VERY GOOD FIC HERE.
person faerie
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOOOOOD!! What is he gonna do to?? PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE send Sesshie to the rescue!! Please don't make us wait too long for the next update!! I am having so much fun with this fic. It's so well written.
person Taiki
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*wow* a new chappie!!! *gloomps* At first sight I thought you has left your RL behind and has furiosly tyout out the story in this short time - I mean 7 chapters!? - but it was only 1 chap *lol* Okies I'm heading off for my reading pleasure ^^
person Taiki
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How could she go back to that awful 'father' of her??? *aaarg* And how could Sess possible find her now?? Anyway it was a great chapter. 1 Question: How do you build the human/yokai society in this story? Atst ist it looks like the youkais are all rich people... is that right? Oh, I need the next chapter! *shivers*
person Nym
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Geez! This is a really, REALLY great fic!! I just can't get enough of it! I cant' wait to see what happens to Rin. What has Naraku done to her? I can't wait to read your next Chapter!
person No One Knows
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cool!!

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