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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person nefertari
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This Sess/Rin fic is really good !!!
Please continue!!!!
I look forward to chapter 6!!!
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good, i cnd tnd thee to update
person sessylover
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!! The plot is sooooo realistic, i felt like crying at time in the story, you put o much emotion in to the story, i am LOVE'N IT!!!!!!! please update soon!!!!!
person KARINA
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uuuummm.........I wanna say......... when are you putting inthe next chapter?
Its killing me here waiting and waiting,and waiting ect ect. (patience is not one of my strogest virtues)
Anyways plezz more, more,more,more, MORE!!!! One question what about Miraku?
Where is he? And poor RIN I feel sorry for her (now I love my parents) Oh and if Naraku isn't her father than what happen to his real father and who is or who was he. And her mother what of her? Also how did she came to be with NARAKU. ummmmm? BIG QUESTIONS HUH?
person #1kikyohater
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!Nice cliff hanger!I'm mad naturally,but I just had to tell you it was a good cliffhanger.Most authors leave at the stupidest 'hangers,but that was genuinely creative.This fic is definitely on my list.


Later!
person nightmareofcat
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very very interesting please update soon
person Tiranth
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh no...poor Rin...what is he going to do to her? *grabs Sesshomaru by the ear* Go save her you idiot!!!!! *begins to pace nervously* Please update soon, I can't stand suspense (well actually I love it and I love this story!!!!)
person Evelyn
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter! i cannot wait to see what happens next! i hope sessy hurries up and rescues Rin
from that bastard Naraku! Please update soon.
person dragonflyelj
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK Inu Yasha is just an annoying dumbass in this fic! I am so frustrated with him right now, I could scream! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Beruda
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O my GOD! This story is getting even more intense. Another great chapter, I am on pins and needles. I like the way you didn't take the easy way out. With Rin escaping and all it really adds drama, good call. Wait till Sess finds out, I see a battle brewing for sure and he only has three weeks, serves him right, and he better make it too. Man Naraku is a total piece of shit. Well all I can say is I want to read more (just like everyone else I'm sure). :)