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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person Karasu
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO it has been 10 days since chapter 5 was put up, and I Cant take it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What will it take to get Chapter 6 up?? Huh?? I can say that this is the best fic I have EVER read, BECAUSE IT IS TRUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEASEEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!
person KARINA
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, its me again. (waves hand) ^_^
I was just wondering WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
I love your story very much and your chapters are lovely but I kinda got tire of reading them all over again.
Please I don't wanna lose interest in the story. ~_~
Please hurry on with the next chapter, SOON!!
Don't make me get angry at you. >_<
person Faith
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a really great fic. How far into the K/I relationship are you going to go? Anyway...I love this so don't keep us waiting too long!
person SessRin2003
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was one powerful chapter. Now I can only wish for is that Sess comes and saves Rin and have a littl but a lot of sexy fun....
person New Fan
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have a question. Well, serveral. Now that Sess has marked Rin, he is very attracted to her, but she only a child. How will Sess relieves him self if Rin is to young to provide for him. Will he have an "affair" with Kagaura until Rin is older (maybe causing a fatal attraction between Kagaura and him self putting Rin in the middle)or when Rin is ready to have an adult relationship when she gets older and h fro from her ordeal with Naraku. Will Naraku still be in the picture until the end chasing and wanting Rin or will he be taking care of early in the story. Please let me know. Thanks and update soon.
person animechick262003
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved latest chapter!!! Oh and yes I too am from the south. Biscuit eater is a very cn ten term. Sweet home alabama to be exact!! LOL but anyways love the chap excellent job!! Thanks for reviewing my fic and keep up good wrk!!




Take Care


Kiea


aka
nimenimechick262003 ^__^
person fyyrrose
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know you're a good author when you have your reader screaming Rin no baka...we-ll that's what I was doing! Mind you I was getting weird looks from the people in the comp. lab, but who cares! I love this dark fic *drools* I was needing this 'kick' as a muse to my own writings; so thanks! Arigatou. Looking forward to the next delicious chapter ^_~ my mind is wa, th, that everyone knows, so keep the chapters coming!

Fyyrrose
person CryinAngel
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
whats with thi fic?
Its almost as if it was taunitng me
it keeps popin up with the updated fics and gets me really exited
and then i look at the date and how many chapters are up and i get really disapointed
ist soooooo irritating
person Toguro
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please!!! I love this story I NEED MORE!!!!! ^__^
person Gackt_lover_kawaii
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like you story. You're a very good writer. I like how you keep them in character somewhat. Also...this is for me...don't Make Sesshoumaru purr...I mean come on...he's a dog! Why do people do that!? it drives me nuts! I also hate when they make Kagome's eyes blue...they're brown dammit!! BROWN!! *gasp* o.O Sorry I was ranting. I ly lly liked your story and hope you write more. could you inform me when you update? Peace and kisses.


-Gackt_lover_kawaii