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Ch. 10) Upset, No not on this chapter. But the way you may setup the next chapter..... I don't know. I not one to sugar-coat much. I believe in what your story is bringing out. I'll continue on. Peace!

Ch. 7) Wow, this is WHACKED! What an experience to have. Poor Rin, And Poor Sesshomaru. Rin could not be blamed If she shut herself from the world. Just go into a catatonic state! I better save more for later. I continue another time. I'm going to get myself together. Still loving your storytelling!

Ch. 6) Oh Damn, Damn, Damn! Shit! Poor baby! That MF Naraku OOOOOOO SHIT! I'm going to continue, I'm losing IT! But reallly You are Great!

Ch. 5) Damn! Fear can sometime save you and sometime put you in more hot hell. Poor Rin. Surrounded by hell! She need serious prayer! I'm loving this dark fic and I'm suprised!

Ch. 1)Wow! Deep. Very Deep. Wonderful way of telling a deep dark story, Leaving the imagination to wonder. I like the way you word the all to painful situation and decision process a tormented person goes through. I will continue to read. Peace

Ch. 2) I'm glad you're continuing this story. I can actually visualize every account you give. Love it so far!

Ch. 3) Wow! This is deep like the ABYSS! A LEVIATHAN of a PROBLEM!!!!!! GREAT! JUST GREAT! I'm reading on. Oh, I like the way Sesshomaru is suffering. It may not have been your intentions, but I love it when Authors shake him up!

Ch. 4) Yea, Yea! Now comes the meat!!! Really you write very well. Usually dark stories gets to me. But I'm being brave. You write so well that I'm into your expression of words, and I'm letting my emotions take a break. Write On! Peace!

First, I hope that whatever it is that has kept you away from your fans for so long is nothing serious. Feel free to e-mail if you need a faceless friend to listen to your troubles.

So, back in June I reviewed and said I would be checking on you often, which I have. I have also since then, begun my own fanfic and now have 12 chapters posted with 8 to 10 more to go. As a fellow fanfic writer, I know how tiring and time consuming it can be to continue writing when you have real life to attend to, but for the love of all that is holy!!! Your readers are drooling for that promised sequel! Please write one soon!

I just finished the story and I gotta say I'm just blown away. I can only imagine the strength it took to write all the those horrible scenes. By the way don't remove any of them! They make the story itself even more realistic. Half through I was so angry that if Naraku was an actual character I would have hunted him down myself and finished what Sesshomaru started, epsecially after the way he fucked with her mind like that. I honestly can't wait for the sequel. Good luck with that.