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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person New Fan
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for answering my question. I have another question. Sess made Rin his mate, but Naraku can claim her ( have sex). My question is can he also make her his mate in other word can he override Sess claim and if he can what does that means for Sess and Rin. Also, this chapter has me in suspense on what will happen to Rin. Update very, very soon.
person Pallas
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sesshomaru finds her soon (or Kouga)! Rin would be safe (even though she may not think so), and that would make this reader feel a lot better! Update!!!
person PsYcHoKeLl
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh how dare you leave a cliffy like that? Sesshoumaru better find her soon...
person nefertari
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HURRAY!!!
YOu HaVe UpDAted FinALly!!!!
PlEAse KeEp Up wiTH yOuR GoOD WorK!!!
I LOvE tHiS FiC!!!!
person Tiranth
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! No fair...cliffy....not nice. Oh what is he going to do to poor Rin? Please tell me everything will work out in the Tir
person dragonflyelj
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I would be curious to know who Rin's mom was. Did she die by Naraku's hand? Is she still alive. If she is alive, why does she allow that slime to have her? Or was she dead before Rin could remember her, and so not relevant to the story? I vote in favor of Naraku dying the most gruesome death you can think of, we all know you are good at writing dark fic's too! lol. K take care.
person Mistress Sakura
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That is one great chapter. Had me on the edge of my seat the whole time.
person No One Knows
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really really hope Sess kills Naraku! This is soooooo good!
person Toguro Ototo
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYYYYYYY thank you so much I'm happy now
person Taiki
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*waves* how you're doing? Do you feel better now or are you stilck? ck? I'm just a little concerned that one of my favs writers is still knocked out ^^ I have a little something for you *g* But I won't say anything... hi-mi-tsu desu!! *lol* I will email it to you if its ready *hugs* Taiki