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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person Amanda
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. Never expected that! Hope they find Rin soon!
person New Fan
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So you are telling me in this chapter that Naraku knows or understand the full impof aof a demon and it mates. That he feels exactly what his mate feels and maybe visa vera. He used that to torture not only Rin but Sess himself. That sick. That's very sick of Naraku. I hope that the next chapter he will suffer and suffer painfuly.

person Beruda
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man, I think that was more intense than the first chapter. Somehow it was more upsetting. Another GREAT chapter, ummm what's Naraku up to, he seems to know that Rin's been marked and is trying to torture Sess and Rin and enjoy himself at the same time ( oh that's so like him). This is going to be some test of wills, as always, MORE MORE MORE! :)
person No One Knows
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
person DelKaidin
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sessho. Poor Rin. Kouga... you better find her quick!!!
person SA-X
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woo!!! Another chapter is up and I am happy, Scarecrow, you truly have a unique ability to keep me wanting more...thank you. My favorite genre is dark/drama, I know that may sound weird but I love reading these types of fics where someone suffers....heh heh uhhhhhh I AM NOT EVIL OR A SADIST OK. Keep up the good work because I love it. ^__^
person Taiki
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh god O.o Yeah you're right - you have scaerd me a lot. *bibber* Naraku's such an evil badass >.< And poor Rin, not knowing what real love feels like and craving for everything that might be tase the same... even when it's not .... All around a good chapter with another bitter masturbation *sobs*
*hugs* Taiki
person leelee189
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for you to update again, but I imagine it's hard to update with everything else you have to do. WOuldn't it be funny his his story if Sess dropped Rin off to school? Can you imagine the look on the other girl's faces when Rin actually has enough to eat and decent clothes and a hottie? Hee HEe that would be cool.
person Sara
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG - I hope Fluffy does hateful, tortuous things to Rin's father! And when he finds out how Rin is being treated.....Have to read the rest! I like this already!
person Sara
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update!!!! This is such a good story! I want to see what Fluffy will do to get Rin back and how Sango, Koga, Inuyasha and Kagpme play a part in it! And how Sango and Kagome play a part with Rin's healing! Of course Naraku WOULD be the bad guy! Bad cliffies!!! ^_^