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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think I can say that that last chapter sickened me. litterally to the point that i may go puke
just the idea of doing that with your own father be he biologically or not EEEEEEWWWWW!
and the worst part is that the sex scene is well written EEEEEEEWWWW!
I honestly think that you wanted this reac if if not, then u is one sick individual
now i gotta get nasty immages out of my head b4 i wind up puking up my supper
oh yeah one last time EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
just the idea of doing that with your own father be he biologically or not EEEEEEWWWWW!
and the worst part is that the sex scene is well written EEEEEEEWWWW!
I honestly think that you wanted this reac if if not, then u is one sick individual
now i gotta get nasty immages out of my head b4 i wind up puking up my supper
oh yeah one last time EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Im speechless!your so good at this fanfic!I really hope you make a sequel type thing,this time with different characters.Or maybe another Rin/Sesshy one.Only make Sess a little more like.....well,Sess.I think he seems way too nice.I like Sess because of his''my way or the highway'' atitude.If you want really good ideas/tips,you should read BEFORE LOVE HONOR if you havent already.
Later!
Later!
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
man oh man is naraku a complete fuck or what! I really really hope he gets his in the end...you've got a great story here
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That Naraku can de so twisted to do that to Rin. To make her feel so worthless. The way you write this story is very realistic, and that makes it all the more painful to read about Rin's pain. I hope it will get better for her soon. I also hope that Sesshomaru won't hold this againsr. Pr. Please continue soon!
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pooor Rin, what will she do. She is at the end of her rope and she does not see any altermative. I hope that Sess saves her before it is to late. Will Naraku get awithwith this like he always get away in the amine. Let me know. This chapter was one of the darkest yet. Update sooooon!! ^__^.
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! I hate Naraku even more now! >:[ Poor Sess...and Rin too, I guess. -_-;
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a powerful chapter. I hope that you make the next one where they find Rin and able to defeat Naraku. I feel bad for Sesshamaru
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter for one of my favorite authors.
The vomiting thing must be Naraku's work, huh?
Cause in the beginning of the chapter you said he has the ability to play with a tortured mind. Or it could be the mark that's doing it.
And here I thought Naraku was actually going t nic nicer to Rin. oes oes Naraku know that Rin is marked?
Is Sesshoumaru Lord of the Western Lands or is he just really powerful?
:: sigh :: I have so many questions to ask you.
But I'll wait till the next chapter for more answers.
Keep up the good work.
The vomiting thing must be Naraku's work, huh?
Cause in the beginning of the chapter you said he has the ability to play with a tortured mind. Or it could be the mark that's doing it.
And here I thought Naraku was actually going t nic nicer to Rin. oes oes Naraku know that Rin is marked?
Is Sesshoumaru Lord of the Western Lands or is he just really powerful?
:: sigh :: I have so many questions to ask you.
But I'll wait till the next chapter for more answers.
Keep up the good work.
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's all yours! Whoa . Intense chapter. Poor Rin. That Naraku is a bastard. I wonder if he would see the same thing Sess did when Sess finally takes her?
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sooo intense. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please, please, please update soon.