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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! You updated!! Anyway, loved the new chapter! It was GREAT!!!
Ugh! Have i ever mevtioned how much i HATE Naraku? He's such a bastard!!!
I can't believe Rin though, what the heck got into her! Me confused though,
what exactly was happening to Sess? Anyway, great new chapter and update soon, k.
Till next time! ~_~
Ugh! Have i ever mevtioned how much i HATE Naraku? He's such a bastard!!!
I can't believe Rin though, what the heck got into her! Me confused though,
what exactly was happening to Sess? Anyway, great new chapter and update soon, k.
Till next time! ~_~
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the rewrite. You made some things clear. Now I am looking for chapter 8. Update sooooon .
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I copied the story before it had been updated, then pasted it onto a blank document, went back to the "updated" chapter 7 then back to the original chapter 7 read some more went back to the updated version, and I kept doing that. I only noticed a couple maybe one or two paragraphs that were changed. So my question is, why did you revize this chapter?
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter 7, s ges gettin better every time I read it, and everyone here knows Sesshomaru could beat the living hell out of Naraku am I right or rig right. Yea so keep writing.
Signed,
V
Signed,
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Rin! PLEASE DO MORE. I WAIT YOUR CHAPTERS EVERY TIME!!
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I would have to say this story is very dark, emotional, and well written. Plecontcontinue, I will watch for the update.
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn that was a good chapter! That bastard!!! Kill!!! I'm gonna kill him! :)
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story, while disturbing, is superbly written and emotionally engaging. One of the few on this page I have been unable to stop reading. Please, keep up the excellent work.
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I could see Naraku using is ways to convince Rin of is love for her,that JERK. I can't see Naraku pleasuring himself with Rin anymore, and where's Sesshomauro when you need him beside jerking himself in the room (just kidding, I love Sesshy). Can't wait till father finds out that Sesshy has a mate and when Sesshy will save Rin.
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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What I want to know is how old was Rin when Naraku started to do this to her,and how was her childhood growing up?. I still cant get over this chapter omg it is so dark.update soon