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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person BSASAMI
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How long are you going to torture Rin with him( I can't say his name)? I hope you can give us some good news involving Rin for once in this fic, and make Sesshomaru move his white tail and start looking for Rin NOW! Still love your fic.
person anhimals
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ive been reading your story but i haven't reviewed(or at least i don't remember). your fic is dark but yet it isd thd though. i feel sorry for rin. i mean, there are people out there who are like her suffering like that. one of the many reasons why some guys are scum bag. i got to admit your cliffhanger was good. update soon so we can know who they are going to call. naraku is such a bastard, he deserves to die a painful death in your dark fic.
person Beruda
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sheesh! although you've written another great chapter, I've decided that I can't read this story at night any more, It's to intense. Oh where will it all end, I'd like Rin to have some sense of happiness, at this rate she'll commit suicide befor Sess can get to her, j/k. By the way, I liked the resoning Sess had about where Naraku is hiding out, very clever.
person Pallas
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An update! Does Rin never gets a break? Hope you update soon!
person Seth
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh*
Again this is so delightfully engrossing... It literally leaves me breathless, at times causing me to gasp and wince. Wonderful write as always and terrif' job with stayin' in character and all...



--Seth
person No One Knows
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome
person Kawool
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sessy will save her soon....Onegai (Puppy Eyes Mode)

Keep writing

Kawool
person Wrath
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sick shit man. Keep going. I'm thoroughly enjoying this and I can't wait to read more.
person New Fan
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Naraku is a smart devil isn't he. Always two steps ahead. I hope that not only Rin saw the fox demon, but the fox demon saw her. I just realized what happen to poor Sango. I hope that she will be reintroduce and maybe help find Rin. Update very soon.
person KaeNoel
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*pouts* poor Rin, Stupid Naraku *growls* I hope Sessy finds her soon