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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person anhimals
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
does this mean sess will be finding rin soon? please yes. rin doesn't deserve this. damn that bastard naraku! update soon.
person Neko
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
STOP TORTURING ME WITH THESE DAMN CLIFF HANGERS! Must know what happense next!! X.x
person InuYoukaiOtaku
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU?!?!?!?! JUST STOP THERE?!?!?!?! ARG!!! THINGS COULD TURN GOOD, THINGS COULD TURN BAD!! IMUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! one: sesshomaru will find rin through the mirror, and earn rins trust or two: naraku will sense the presence and hurt rin really bad...hey..it could happen..i hope number one happens.


keep up the greatwork..psh, i wish i had the ability to write and make people bang there heads against walls because they stopped the author stopped writing. -_-'

Update as soon as possible! ^.^
person No One Knows
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting so freaking awesome!!!!
person KaeNoel
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* happily Yay he's gonna be able to find her! yay! but Kouga might find out! *cries* poor Rin!
person leelee189
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah UpDATE! * runs around in excited circle and collapses* See what happens when you dont update for a while? Good chapter - poor Rin. Please let Sess rescue her soon!
person Ugly
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He's just the worst! I hope you can have Seshomaru and Rin together soon. I hope she doesn'tget too scared by Seshomaru's presence, but atleast this way she would be save from any of her fathers perversion. *shivers* It's just so sad though... can't he treat her with just a bit more respect, I mean... in the family bathroom? It's juts disgusting! Just because of a boy specking to Rin, it doesn't give him...ugh. I can't believe his Jealousy would take him so far as to do such disgusting things to her, and make her do such disgustign things like that to Rin.

But non-the less, I love this story, and you finally updated! YAY! I hope you'll update sooner. Can't wait for the next chappie!^^
person Kawool
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rin, I hope SuperSessy is going to kick this baboon ass soon !!!
person Kae N� �
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha die you sick bastard die! mwahahahaha(notices the mas of people staring at her in fright*..ha...........ha.......................... *cough* ahem none of you saw that............
Anyways, great ficcy, wonderfully dark. Oh and a continuation, ooooooooohhhhhhh sounds good to me!
person leelee189
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah ! Updates are good! Keep writing please!

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