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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the discription of Kanna...it was dead on
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.o;; T'is well written, good story line.... It's just... Ew... Poor Rin, *huggles her* I feel ad tad that that happens. *Remember it's just a story* Sesshoumaru should give Naraku to a big burly black guy to be raped in an alleyway somewhere...Repeatedly....
*twitch*
Write more soon and um... stuff...
Set-chan
*twitch*
Write more soon and um... stuff...
Set-chan
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was an excellently written fic. i've never really been scared of naraku before this fic, but this fic actually scared me at points. you, whoever you are, are a damn good writer. and i love the way you portrayed sesshomaru, as a being with flaws who does not want to be nice. but i pity sess and rin for their bond simply b/c it must feel horrible to sessy to feel naraku raping which in some ways is naraku violating him. do you get my logic? whatever. plese update soon, this fic is amamzing!
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope, no I pray that you won't have Sesshoumaru and his guests wittness what Naraku wants Rin to do in the bathroom??!!!!!! I hope that for the first time Rin feels Sess and I hope that Sess gives her the courage to not do what Naraku's want her to do. She going to be punished any so let it be in the privacy of there own home. But , when Naraku thinks that he will hurt her again that when Sess is going to stop him. Do not get me wrong, I think that Rin has suffered enough and it is time that she find some peace. Update soon.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you describe Kanna here. You pinned her, and even had you not known who she was, your description was so vivid, that it wouldn't matter. I can't believe no one notices how that scumbag treats her. Not that she is in public that often, but still. I just get so outraged for her, and the fact that she believes what he says. I was wondering, did the abuse start as soon as her mother died, how long has Rin been suffering this? BTW I noticed this update was quicker than usual, thank you!
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaugh, poor Rin. >_<;;;;;;; That poor, poor girl. I sure hope Sesshoumaru is going to treat her like precious glass after this. *sobs* She's gonna be SO dammaged that it's gonna take him forever to mend the broken peices..
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sesshoumaru finds Rin soon. Your description of how Rin experienced her field trip to the mall was heart-breaking; what's so normal to us, is a whole different experience to her. Once again, a very good story!!
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating, wow you sure did keep me on my feet with this chapter. Cant wait to read the next one.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story (not because rin is suffering), i love the plot!
The way you write is excellent! I absolutely love it...
Can't wait to see Rin and Sesshoumaru together...
Update soon... Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
The way you write is excellent! I absolutely love it...
Can't wait to see Rin and Sesshoumaru together...
Update soon... Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter, but more tpasspasses, the more I want to rip Naraku's tounge out so I can fry it and feed it to him while he is still bleeding. Poor Rin, I hope Sesshoumaru saves her soon, and don't worry, your perfectionism is paying off. This story is getting so much better by the chapter. As usual update soon.