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Hi. I just read your story here again. I am just...speechless. I cried agian! The part at the end where Sess is bowing his head before her, shaking, and begging her to not be afraid of him...such oainful emotion. I feel his despair...his desperation. I sincerely hope that you were not just teasing us about a sequel. I really wish to see how Rin and Sess get on with their lives together, and how she will finally accept him and maybe even fall in love with him. I am fairly certian that if you don't write a sequel soon...there will be fanfictions popping up from other authors based on your fanfiction.

Ch. 15) Wow, very powerful. Such anguish and loss. Poor kid. I hope Sess will keep his composure. I love Inuyasha here. You did a fabulous job on this chapter. Write On! Peace!

Ch. 11) Now I hope that this is when shit hits the fan! Boy such suspense, such emotions. Killing me. But I must read on!

Ch. 8) Aww Sugar,Honey,Iced,Tea! I'm glad the unforgiveable wasn't done yet! Damn, how much will this poor child go through! Well, I'm going to read on! Peace!

Ch. 12) Shit's On! Sesshomaru cool demeanor is frightening. Poor Rin, recovery is going to be very fragile. I hope Sess has strength to deal!

Ch. 9) Aww Damn! Electronic Collar! Shit! Uh... I'm getting flustered. I'm ejoying this story, Really! The stroytelling is just superb. I'm really feeling this. Just Great!

Ch. 13) I agree with Sess, That bastard would be dead. But everyone has a right to their life-force. I Like the fact that Miko's are the Enforcers. Struck me kind of cute and deadly. I love the use of the characters. I am really trying to deal with this dark story. I must say I'm suprise that I'm going on. Your'e a wonderful writer and I can see how this would be draining. Peace!

Ch. 16) Whew! My stomach is in a knot. I....I am now going to say that even though this story is as Dark as Hell, Hell is whas someone goes through in such a situation. Don't look through Rose Colored Glass, Don't Sugar Coat Anything. All though this is ficticious, the situation is all so REAL. I Applaud you for writion such a story using our favorite characters. Yes, I love it when Sesshomaru is shook-up(his arrogant ass had to grow) I felt he not being out of character was needed. His consuming hatred for humans forced his life to be with one that was tormented. Hate breeds ugliness and he has to deal with what hate does. All though I felt that his hate stemmed from the torture he witnessd seeing Rin was going through with Naraku. Inuyashs was just beautiful in this. Even though his brother's hatred tormented him, Inuyasha understood what that could do. I thought at first Sesshomaru's youkai may have forced him to mark Rin to protect her. I was way off-line. Anyway, I Really enjoyed this Fic. Please continue Dark or otherwise. Peace to you Always

Ch. 14) Hope! Always Hope! I love the fact that Inyasha is the voice of reason. Sess needs a shake-up, but Kaede's presence always represents "Calm in the midst of Storm" to me. This is really good! Peace