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Yeah the chapter was graphic, but it was called for. It was worth the wait, and I can't wait until Sesshoumaru makes his entrence, though I would like to see if Rin would end up defending herself...though she is pretty submissive. You have weeved this story very well, but please update a bit sooner next time.

As an answer to your question, I think it was very descriptive. I think it only makes the story that much more realistic. I don't really know if Rin, even if she's rescued by Sesshoumaru, ever be able to get over this trauma. I hope you continue soon!

AAAAAH! I'm so glad you updated. ^^ I just reformatted my computer and lost all my bookmarks. So I've found your fic and bookmarked it again. POOR RIN. I will not be happy with this fic till I see Sesshoumaru soothing her and teaching her how to love. Grrrrr! Heh.. I love it. Please continue. ^^

*grabs steering wheel from Sess and drives like a maniac towards the house* MOVE YOU BAKA AUTOMOBILE! *VROOM!* X[ I REALLY don't like Naraku now! You are so goo, leaving us cliffies like this! ~.^ Update soon!

Oh THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! I absolutely love this story. I have been looking forward to the next chapter!!! I do not believe that your story is graphic. You are trying to convey something dark and you are doing a darn good job. I thought that you had curled up and died until I saw the new chappie up tonight. You have made myningning. I hope that you continue this story...and update a little more often. I am on pins and needles here waiting to see what happens next. Keep up the EXCELLENT work and DO NOT let anyone tell you that your story is too dark. You do have warnings up as you said totheother reviewer. If one does not like to read dark fics then one should not. Until next time!!!!

Sesshomaru's Lady :o)

this chapter made me sad reading. im almost in tears to read how much pain and abuse someone like rin can take. i am very glad that this is just a fanfic not real. im glad my dad doesn't treat me like that. i hope sess will find her soon. i usually don't read dark stories just they just distrub me but your story is good though. i hope you will update soon.

chapter 10 was well worth the wait, OMG what a chapter. i could really feel that moment when Rin heard Naraku coming back into the house. Freaky! but you have the NC17 rating already so that's fine, graphic stuff doesnt bother me

but for the love of god update again and soon!!!!

Hey great fic ok it was kindda dark but still was good
Update soon ok me wanna know were sesshomaru is going to arive....
And if shippo being frinds whit rin helps her a litlle bit...
any way e-amil me when your next chapter is up please!!!!
well till next time!!!

Naw. Don't even think to delete anything from this story. You're right, it's called ADULTfanfiction, you arn't forcing people to read this story. If they don't like it..they don't have to read it. ^-^ Me on the other hand...I like this story..not..that I'm into dark stuff..really I'm not, the whole time I'm reading this, I'm hoping it turns out good in the end ^_^'' You're a great author, and don't let anyone make you think this is to graphic for even a 'adult' fiction website. If they have a problem with it, maybe they need to grow up. ^-^ Like I said, great job, keep up the good work.

Best damn story on the entire site