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YES! Now hurry with the next chap!!!

Another excellent and horrifying chapter. I don't know how much more my heart can take. Rin, you poor baby, you're going to need a lot of therapy. I just want Naraku to die the worst death and dissmemberment (is that spelled right?) imaginable. That's all I ask.

Yes! Another chapter! I was beginning to worry that you were bored with this. About the graphicness of this chapter, my advice would be don't let your writting be censored. Not everything is pretty. Child abuse is a dark and sad topic and this story should make everyone who reads it as uncomfortable and stunned as possible. I completely applaude your efforts. Give us another chapter soon.

OMG YES!! he found her !! cant wait for the next chapter!

I hope Sesshomaru gets in there in time before Naraku do anything seriously to Rin, but I know your're going to make us suffer a little more before she's rescue. I hope Sesshomaru tortures Naraku little by little till he dies the youkai ways. I will be waiting for your next chapter.

For m was was very racy. I understand what you were trying to express for this chapter, but I still
found it to graphaic for me. I can not wait to see how you will write the next chapter
(Shippo meeting the Inu brothers). That's the only way they will find her in time. I do not
think that Rin will survive what he has in store for her in her room. I think that Naraku has felt what Sess
was trying to doing (use Kanna to find Rin) and he is going to punished Rin for it. I believe this will be Rin's "final" time he
will punished her. I hope that the next chapter will be the chapter she is rescued (maybe make it a long chapter, with some many
possiblilities that can happen trust me a long chapter will not be boring). Update soon.

well its wellwell written. my imagination was running wild with all the thoughts of what horrible things he'll do to Rin. my plea is that sesshomaru saves the day so that she DOESNT have to go through all that............that would scar me for life all the way into complete insanity. i say BRING ON THE ROMANCE!!!! im ready for a good laugh and some sess/rin lovin'. keep up the good work!!

Good story but I am waiting for Sess to find her. Enough with the ass of her father. Love your writing keep it up =)

*cries* I'm glad you're taking a really hard look at the reality of abuse, its a great feat to accomplish and you have done so marvelously, and in a way that captures the attention of your readers and the twisted sorrow on disease that abuse i soc society.

it hurts to read, but finish it, please.