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Thank you again for another chapter!!! I cannot wait to see what happens next. I will still be on pins and needles waiting. Thank you for updating quickly.. I love it!!! Maybe you can use this when life gets in the way again. :O)

Until next time !!!!

SL

Your writing is exceptional, you have a wonderous talent. But.....Save her, please. This is breaking my heart.

Wow! definately a hard chapter to write. Very detailed, I admit I did cringe several times while reading this chapter, it is a VERY dark chapter, but that is the way the fic is, ne? and you did warn it would be, so I am ok with that, I am just hoping that you are as descriptive in the scene where Sessy gets ahold of Naraku, hehe. Poor poor Rin, all she wants in the world is a friend, and this sick, twisted, sadistic freak has got his hands on her, and there is nothing that she can do, she does not know any other life, she does not know that she can run, all she knows is pain and misery, I hope so badly that Sess will save her from this life soon. Any kind of life with him would be better than the life she now leads.

DAMN that bastard! He deserves to die! I hope yoou will give him a painful death. You should have Sess rip him a new whole or something much worst. I have never hated a character so much as how i hate him. I know he is a fictional character but I can't help it okie. He is soo evil and deserves to die...die i tell you! Now I sound all psycho and shit. The more hate I have for Naraku then that means you are doing a good job writing because he is becomin real. I am looking forward to the next chapter because that means Rin will be resecue soon(right?) I am very HAPPY that you did update so fast. I hope you will update soon. =] (its funny how i have such a psycho like review and end it with a happy face...what does that tell u about me...hehe)

YAY!!!!!! *dances in street* they're going to find her!!!! an u d u didnt scar me, but man ----thats just absolutely horrible what he's doing to Rin. anyways, keep up the wonderful work!! im ready for sess/rin lovin'!!!

hurry up \w a nother chapter please ihope it ends romanticly \w a good non violent lemon

wow, thanks for the quick update. I can't wait for the next chapter. I see the submisive thing, but a girl can hope. Though realistically, I understand that it will be years of therapy and care before she can be self confident enough to defend herself. Great job on the chapter! Can't wait to see how Sesshy defends his mate.

Please tell me Sess saves her and kill the SOB

They're so close... I really hope she'll be rescues in your next chapter! Please update soon, ok?!

Sesshomaru,Inuyasha, and Shippou to the rescue. Let's all hope that they get to her in time before Naraku do any damage to her. Two chapters in two days I'm so happy. Can't wait for the next chapter.