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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person The Dragon
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What about Teddy? I'm sure Rin will want to come back for him! Teddy can't be left behind! ;)
BTW- If this story is to remain a dark fic, I want a sequel of the aftermath like you said! Please?! *Baby Inu eyes*
person Pallas
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally, she's being saved!! And I hope Sesshoumaru shows Naraku some REAL pain!! And please, after finishing this story, write that continuation you're talking about!! I would love to see both Rin and Sesshoumaru heal from these experiences and come close! (Or continue your other stories; they're great too!!)
person dragonflyelj
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya Scarecrow!
OMG finally caught! I can't wait to see the next chapter, make it really gruesome. Normally I don't go for that kind of thing, but... THE FUCKER DESERVES IT!!!!!! I had a feeling that Naraku had something like this in mind when you were talking about the pet shop, poor Rin. She is so childlike, and how will she react when she realized her puppy will bring her to Sess? Update again soon please.
person Tori
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, this may day day!!! What a great chapter! My eyes just fled through it! I would love to see a continuation of this story if you're up to it. I feel like I'm too involved with Rin character to see this end at ch.15. I can't let it end until I know she'll be okay emotionaly. But of course we've got to get through this part first so please update soon!
person anhimals
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im happy that rin is rescue! she can finally have peace...or will she? update soon. i want to see what you will do with naraku.
person New Fan
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I had to write to you again I have a question. Is there any significat you your statement:
when Inuyashas waarinaring at the 'cuts on her midrift'. If there is please email me or give me
the answer in on your next chapter. Thanks. My email will be posted above. Thanks again.
person New Fan
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First, I want to thank you for making my day. Two chapters I am in heaven -_^.
The Inu brothers knows where Rin is and they are going to kick Naraku ass. Let
me go so I can read the next chapter. ^_^
person New Fan
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rin I guess this is the worst type of punishment she ever endure.
Plesase Inu brothers SAVE HER!!! Update soon. Now I going to read chapter 12
person leishkychan
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey keep up whit the good work ok....
and UPDATE SOON me wanna know what happens to rin & Sesshomaru...
great fic by the way..
person New Fan
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, Naraku is getting his. I hope that if you write a sequel it
will be right after the last chapter ( in other words when you post
the last chap the new story is out the same time) ^_^ I know I
am asking for to much. Let just say I am not an over acheiver. Update soon. -_^