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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person Sess\'sBewitchingBabe
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
R U GOING @ UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLZ Say YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person dragonflyelj
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You mean I get to be review 300? Woo HOOOO!!! hehe. Yes!!!!! She is in the hospital, the fucker is mutilated, Sessy is by her side, and poor little Shippo looks like he found a home too! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
person theMaven
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You've already got the set-up for the continuation with the help Sango's caretaker could provide Rin, so you have to follow through. And after everything Naraku has done, he's gotta pay the price; it's the law of Karma ^__^ Yes, this is a dark fic, but not as bleak as some I've read. It's well-written and evenly paced, and the characterizations are fairly accurate. I'll have to keep my eyes open for your updates--theMaven :)
person Vicious
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sesshomaru could slowly rip out the hanyous fingernails and then burn his hair before hanging him by his balls from the house. Naraku needs a slow painful death or slow painful life. You do good with descriptions and scenes continue you should.
person Beruda
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh happy day! Is Naraku finally going to get some of his own back? I hope so, I hope so. killing's to good for that so and so. Put him in a room with a bunch of men with huge penises (is that spelled right?) and then well you know, and then dismemberment, he he he. :0
person liz
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter, and i really like your story in general.
Please please make a continuation of it! I think a lighter sequal fic will really balance this one out.
You're a great writ I I really like your style!
Revenge is so sweet!
liz
person Evelyn
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Finally that bastard Naraku is getting what he deserves! Great Chapter, update soon.
person koneko-neko
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean absolutely amazing, I have never been so enthralled by one author of any kind in my entire life. You've had me by the throat since chapter one and i'm back here everyday looking for updates. I've checked into all the stories you have published and they are all the same kind of mesmerizing. Truly hypnotic is everything you have published and you are extremely gifted. i just had to tell u before i exploded.
person Trebek
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! WOOT! ^^ Nasty Naraku got what's coming to him! Hopefully Sess will help Rin heal after all the $hiT she's been through.
person Minako
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dang, are goo good at writing fanfictions...