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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person Wrath
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Welcome back. And what better way to come back with such a great chapter. Can't wait for more.
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what in the hell why did you stop . you got skill i love the story. my friend and i want to know what happen next. you left us atilffilff hanger that not fair. we want more we stady up two hour past our bed time. we are college student with 8:00 classes and that was no fair. but the same time it was good. we couldn't stop reading your story. i have to go to class now ............... what happen next. we like it a lot

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person theMaven
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates! ^__^ Sounds as if Naraku got just what he deserved . . . hehe. Yeah, it would've been nice if Sess could've ripped him to shreds, but you can't always get what you want. And poor Rin. Will Sess ever give her the stuffed animal he bought for her from the convenience store?
person yue
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh YEAH!!! naraku finally got the shit beaten out of him. how appropriate. i hope u get to update soon to finish this story. poor rin. she deserves a happy ending.
person Tori
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've loved every second of this story and I'm very interested to see how you intend to handle the after-math. Thanks for the update! I can't wait to hear from you again (maybe soon?)!
person New Fan
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can understand perfectly why this chapter was hard for you to write. Is it because of the circumstances that
has happen to Rin or was it something else? I do not know if you are going to focus the next chapter on
the hospital scence between Rin and Sess or will you push the timeline into the future when Rin is trying to heal and she finally realize her conection to Sess.
I hope that when this story end you may think of doing auel.uel. Just think about it and I hope that you will update soon.
person friendlyreader
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOO HOOOO shes alive and writing in style!!! man, i love this story. i almost wet myself when i saw that u updated. *dances* u are just so good and im glad ur back. rin and sesshomaru are in great need of some mental healing and love. i believe ur great skills that everything will turn out beautifully. enjoy urself and keep writing!
person shaid
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
knowing that she's being tortured makes this hard to read, but I'm kinda drwan to it. I've loved reading this. I can't wait to read the rest.
person anhimals
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you made my day today by updating your story again! it was a brief chapter but yet had so much emotions in it. i thought it was sweet how sess can be so overprotective of rin even though he doesn't really know her that well. i hope naraku will get the death sentence with a horrible horrible way of dying. i can't wait to see how rin's reaction will be like seeing sess saving her. i remember the first time she ran away from he but then he also attacked her so i don't know. im all excited about how you will end the story. will there be a lemon between the two of them? can i request one between the two of them? well updat soon! =]
person Someone Out There
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeap. I thought you had ended it in the last chapter, cause it read as it did. Anyway I did (doke tke this story even as dark as it's been. Poor Rin, she's really had it bad. I'm glad the Sess has even seem to have gotten more attached to her (I know, I know, even though she's still so young). I will be looking for any other additions that you might make.....