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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person anhimals
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im sitting here with tears in my eyes. it so sad for someone having to go through with such pain. it was ry gry good chapter. now im looking forward to seeing if rin will accept sess. update soon.
person Tori
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's pretty dreary out look for everyone. I'm extatic that you decided to do a sequal though! Will you be dealing with the whole Kagura issue in this story yet, or the sequal? As always, I loved the chapter and can't wait for your update!
person destiny
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is WOW!!! This is such a fantastic fanfic!!! You made me feel anger and happiness!!! That is so good!!! I can't wait till the next chapter! You're doing such a good job!
person lylth
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ i am in love with this story, the angst, the love, the EVERYTHING. though im not to rape, torure...stuff like that, but i love a great story. i'll be waiting for more... love, lylth
person anonymous fan dude
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story is AWSOME, and i was up until around 3 in the moring reading it, just itching to see how it ended, and it stops ONE CHAPTER SHORT! ARG! sorry. well, like i said, i absolutely loved the story, and contrary to what some other people were saying, I like the way Sesshomaru is acting. i mean, if he was TOTALY in character, none of that whole mating/markingn thing would havppenppened right? i think he was, for the most part, acting in an ok way. and regarding CH 14, talk about an unexpected twist! I really hope you find it in your heart to hang that naraku from the highest tree in the last chapter until he's dead (or at least make him rot in jail and get ass raped and see how HE likes it! har har har!) oh well, keep up the good work and PLEASE for the love of god, get that last chapter up....i'm desperate!!!

sincerely, a fan
person dragonflyelj
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I anxiously await seeing Rin's reaction upon seeing Sess. Will she allow him to explain things, and will he be able to? Will he stop being so cold and give into his inner desires? To touch her skin, so be gentle and loving with her, to give her everything she has not known for so long. update soon, please.
Fly
person leishkychan
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLease please please UPDATE soon
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_o

I just read this whole thing and I was seeing it as it was happening...

You have a gift, baby; use it!
person New Fan
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now knowing the impossible situation that Rin and Sess are facing, you must write a sequel. This story
is just to good to just end with them meeting each other again. Please think about the sequel (if we readers
are lucky you might be in the process on writing the sequel as I write ^_^) I know wishful thinking. Update soon.
person Seth
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm, simply powerful... Haven't had time to review, though I think this is such a deep, compelling story... I swear it's the best dark/angst story I've ever read. And it is all written with a sense of reality, you know, it doesn't seem fake or you don't think "That wouldn't happen" no, it's all so captivating, it ensnares you and you can almost feel what the characters are feeling... Seriously, this is such... A breathtaking, mindblowing, engrossing write.


~Seth