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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person SP777
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shoot, just when I thought I could breathe again...we get one more chapter. ;-i
person New Fan
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh brother. I could see this happen a mile away. I hope that Sess does not think that Inuyasha
is interesting in his mate? I hope that he knows that he is trying to help, but I could see how it look
in Sess eyes how Rin is responding to Inuyasha. Well I hope that you update soon.
person niki
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter:)plz update soon
person Someone Out There
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. I know that you said that this was going to be the last chapter, but I hope it isn't. Please continue this a little further so that Sesshoumaru and Rin connect. You've done an excellent job on this story all the way through and I think you can still do more with this. Hopefully, I'll be waiting for another chapter......
person Yogi Mutoh
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The last chapter...I was speechless. You have to continue! You simply ust! I don't usually beg, but I would get on my knees and ask for you to go on writing this wonderful story. Please?

This story was well written. Though I did skip some of the "uncomfortable" scenes, I was still impressed. This story, as of yet, moved me. Thanks for writing something so GOOD!
person me
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo what happens next
person me
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo what happens next
person Shadiyaray
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. It is very dramatic. I have never read a Rin and Sess story like this before.
Very emotional and moving.
person INUNAIOMI
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was deep.
keep writing your story is really amazing.
person Tori
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're really pumping out the chapters. This is my personal favorite so far. That scene between Rin and Inuyasha was just heart warming. Not sure what to make of Sesshomaru's reaction, maybe he's jelouse? Or just anxious? Oh well, it's your story. I'm sure that you'll explain in the next chapter.