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ah honey, dont worry about that, u fix away. all we want is another fabulous chapter, so keep up the great work!

I've been reading fanfic for a while now, and I've only come across a handfull of truely inspiring ones and yours definitely fits the bill. Your usage of language is incredible. The raw emotion that radiates from the words is at times surreal. Consider me the newest member of your devoted fans. Update soon!

I've really enjoyed reading your story. I'm glad you care enough to edit after updating. The story is great, demented and sad and really rough, but great all the same.

Please continue.

Your story is Exellent!Please have this story end with a Sess/Rin LEMON!

This story is really wonderful. So full of emotion and very touching. Does it have to end? Yes I know it does.

I am like...staring at the screen. That was so Wow! The emotion in this story is so vivid I can almost feel it happening.
Some parts even scare me. EVery chapter is more engrossing than the last. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next
installment. Pweety Please, begging here. Let it be soon?


Muscrat

HEy this story is terrific. Can't wait for the next. Hope you post soon.

~RED~

i really enjoyed this story and i cant wait to read more.update soon!

OH MY GOD!!!!
untop of the hospital was Sesshomaru....!!!!!
That was so cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was great.... tha ended so...so.... ok that was just to cool!!!!!!
Let me tel you you got to keep up whit stuff like that........
Well anyway I will be waiting for your next chapter ok....
And please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, all I can say it wow. I'm utterly fascinated by this story... No matter how dark and utterly horrifying things between Rin and Naraku became, I stuck with the story. The angst almost killed me, but, I have an incling that Sesshomaru's 'emotion' for Rin is even stronger than Naraku's lust/intense hate of his 'daughter'. I didn't have enough time to sign on for this review, but my user name on this sight is MistressAlf... I can't wait for more of this fanfic, it's addicting in every aspect!
-Ashley