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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person The Dragon
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*~* Sniffle... I-I nearly started to cry at the end there... I never thought of InuYasha talking in such a... A heart felt way. It was very sweet. I can't wait to see Sess's and Rin's meeting. ^-^ *dabs at eyes with tissue*
person Erin
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love dark and angsty stories. I'm not morbid, or depressed. In fact these kind of stories seem to make me feel BETTER about the difficulties in my own life. This work WAS very graphic in nature and I know that this is disturbing to many but as you have said this is a reality in life and it would be hard to portray and accurate picture of your story setting without the painful details. I commend you on an excellent job in doing that and for what Il wal was a very tactful way of doing so at the same time as not leaving too much veg "leave the rest to your imagination" sections. it helps in keeping with the authors storyline when you do not have to spend time creating a scene that the author has left out the details about. thankyou for a very thought provoking and captivating tell. I look forward to a follow up and it would be a great idea if you used the lighter format you had suggested earlier. While this was as good a time as any to draw to a close, the story in whole does feel a bit incomplete with so many questions left up in the air. I'll be looking for it eagerly!!
person flowers
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter. I am truly in love with your fairytale style, and yes, thi lik like a dark fairytale. Very captivating, you have truly kept Sesshoumaru in character and I really respect that. Most fanfics take him out of character as soon as they can, but I love him so much because of his nature. You have captured him and a wonderfully dark and angsty situation with a blinding light at the end of the tunnel. Shit...... this should be a movie. Wow, you have truln myn my respect. I put you up there with jrr and c.s. lewis, and c.s. is my favoriuthouthor. Let me know when your novel comes out, if you aren't writing one, feel ashamed, you should be. Don't keep your talent from the world!!!

UPDATE OR FEEL THE WRAF GOF GOD!!!!!

hehehehe intimidating aren't I?
person koneko-neko
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES,YES,YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You updated i cant tell you how excited i about the new chapters. Like all the rest of your work they are nothing less than brilliant. you are my all-time favorite fan fiction author. Scratch that you ae my favorite author PERIOD! You are a beautiful genius sent to brighten our world. I cant speak for anyone else but i dont think i can be alone in this when i say that your gift for wri is is a gift to us all, and is for me the highpoint in an otherwise dismal and emotionally turbulent life. so thank you and yock sck serious ass!!!!!!!!!
person Red Angel
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bump away! ^_^ I don't even notice because I've got you and your fanfics bookmarked.
person Stop Bumping
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why don't you give others a chase to let there story sit on front page and stop bumping this damn fic until you add another chapter. Only fair thing to do don't ya think. I understand your not the only the one but this fic as sat on front page for days without update. kind of anoying.

Use to be a fan
person yue
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hell yeah i like it. great chapter. the road to recovery is a long and tedious road. its' goin to be hard. im so glad u got a chance to update. as i said, this was a great chapter. i hope u update soon.
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what wrong
person Tiranth
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like that it puts edited stories at the top. It helps me keep an eye on my favorites. I get a little disappointed when I see that its just a revision but ah well. I like it! :)
person Kioki
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please put up more chapters!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the way you write and i absolutely adore this story but i need more of it!!! sO PLEASE UPDATE SOON. iM BEGGING YOU !!!!! wELL HAVE TO GO READ MORE! kEEP WRITING!